Family member who I like (Speaking)

I like my mother. She has a brown short wave* hair and high is pretty similer (similar) to me. She wears red clouthes many times frequently, so I think she likes red colour*. she is good at cooking. When i was young, I saw her cooking in the kitchen every day , so I wanted to have a great cooking skill like her. At that time, my dream is* cook. One of my favorite things about her is that she always smiles at people. Most people who meet my mother say she is so positive and lively. She is generouse and kind. Sometimes It looks little tire*, but I like the way she is. On the other hand, my father is puiet quite conservative. When I got a scolding by my father, my mom gave me relief. Before I came to Canada, my father didn't want me to study abroad, but my mother tried to persuade him. And then, I was able to come here.

*Adjectives usually come in this order:

General opinion; Specific opinion; Size; Shape; Age; Colour; Nationality; Material.

                           SIZE  SHAPE  COLOUR 

Example: "She has short, wavey, brown hair..."

*the colour red =Adjective before noun

*was to become a chef (or cook) You need was because you are talking in the past. 

*Maybe you want to say, "Sometimes she looks a little tired"?

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Have a good start again

Today is 1st Oct Oct. 1st, a start of month again*. I think I need to push myself to work harder and try to well-organize organize better my study schedule.
About my short term target, I wish hope I can finish the second Japanese textbook before December, then I can have two weeks to for revision and overcome the N5 Japanese Language Test. In the long term, I hope I can am able to pass the N2 level in Japanese test before I graduate.

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An eternal company =)

It's very rare that I write about my family or people who I know. But I must talk about my twin sister... yes, I have a twin sister. Everybody says us that we are very similar physically: same ears, same eyes, same hair, same voice and more...

It's funny because until this year I was always be with her, she was an eternal company during my life and I didn't know how it would be to be alone. When I was a child I asked myself how people could travel by bus or go out alone; and when I imagine that situation I think that it would be very boring! because you could not talk or laugh with somebody anyone (I remember I always laughed with her on my travel going way to school).

I must add that I really get along well with her but we are really different! Not only physically but also psychically*; well I always think that each person is unique. We have different styles and ways of thinking... but far* inspite of that, I had really good moments with her.

*or "in the way we think" 

* I think that inspite is what you want to say here "a pesar de" 

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Mi primer texto
Yo estava estaba leyendo un libro "Manual del superpoliglota" de Benny Lewis y esto este autor pedió pidió que nosotros escrevamos escribamos un díario sobre nuestro aprendizaje. Yo hice tres aulas clases de español hasta ahora e y tengo dificuldad de escrebir escribir este texto. Pero me gusta mucho estudiar outro otro idioma. Vamos a ver se si yo puedo escribir todos los días.

Muchas gracias, Daniel.

Se nota que sabes bien el idioma, te falta en la ortografia. Pero es común porque hablas Portugués.

Abrazo 

I have to make this opportunity efficient.

These days, I can back home early about 6:00 PM. So, I have a lot of time to do anything. Of course I should study English using this opportunity, but I can't stop youtube. Someone tell me how can I be serious person? I'm really lack of strong mind.

I have to take advantage of this opportunity.

These days, I come home early, about 6:00 PM. 

Of course I should use this opportunity to study English

But I can't get off youtube

Can someone tell me how I can be a disciplined person?

I lack discipline. 

Keep up the English study! Your doing well!

Farewell Letter

Hello! Just thought I would help you a little, 

"I wish my English could get better and that I could speak more fluently"

or

"I hope my English can get better and I can speak more fluently" 

The rest is good! I hope your English gets better too!