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    August 4, 2013
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    help me, please The bar chart indicates the sales of games software, cds and DVD/video all over the world between 2000 and 2003. From the graph, it is clear that there was a downward trand in the sales of CDs and an upward trend in games software and DVD/video. Overal speaking, the revenue of cds is highest in 3 items whereas that of games software is lowest. During 4 years, the sales of DVD/video rose steeply by approxiately 13 millions dollars. It was at $18 million in 2000 and then reached a peak of over$30 million in 2003. Similarly, the sales of games software went up but not as sharply as DVD. it rose slightly from $13 million in 2000 to $ 18 million in 2003. By contrast, there was a gradual fall in saling CDs. Its sales declined by over $4 million over 4 years.
    August 4, 2013
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    My diary about postcard

    Somebody says "Postcards always spoil my holiday.'So do I!
    I promised I would send a postcard to my friend after I had arrived in Shanghai and she was very happy.But......it seems that sending a postcard here is not so easy.
    After I had bought postcards, I began to think what  i should  write on it because I used to wirte letter to her. I spent whole morning writing it. But when I finished, I found that I made it dirty with ink!
    A moment later I found a problem, here isn't any post office near my uncle's home!
    I felt very sorry to my friend, perhaps I need to send her the postcard after I go back home.

     I think some sentences are still Asian styles. You translate word by word. You should have more long sentences

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    August 3, 2013
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    Chinese study English

    My uncle think chinese who spend many time studying English is bad .And=> and is not often placed here my english is bad.I think studying everything is good for my future.But our study english need more than 10 years.this makes more student don't like english.

     

    never give up your studying. I believe you will succeed in studying English. Let's imagine E is your hobby and you will like it. 

     

     

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    August 1, 2013
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    the disadvantage of nuclear family hi, guys. It's my first entry. It has lots of mistakes so help me correct it. it can not be denied the nuclear family's life is complex and troublesome. When parents raise a family and are unable to control it, their member will be quarrelsome and uneducational. If you don't have enough time to take care of your children, they will neglect thier study and cause lots of trouble. What's more, the nuclear family often has to face up with financial problem. A poor financial situation can have bad infuence on your children. they do not have chances of acheiving the good education basis and good job. This leads to social burden. Furthermore, there are arguements among people in family. It is hard to have the same standview between many people. Last but not least, you have no privacy in a large family. You must to share your room, your bed or even your clothes with your brother/sister. It is difficult to have any time alone because there are so many people in the house. In conclusion, The traditional family is not easy to live.
    August 1, 2013
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    The weather is bad!

    The weather is so bad today! It’s raining all the time! I neither go outside nor go shopping with my friend! So I decided to stay at home, watch TV and help my mother cook something for my family! If it stops raining in the evening, our family will go to see a movie! => it's 1st conditional sentence We will have a good time!

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    August 1, 2013
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