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Hi I'm Aziz from Algeria I want to learn Russian and other languages, make new friends discover cultures.. my native language is Arabic and I'm a teacher of English and I'm good at French! let's have fun
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  • Corrected

    you said:

    Salu.ation, you normally say salye-'tei-shen

    as of interest you said "interEsts"

    you change that sound in to an "i" not "E" and you can omit the first "e" sound to be "intrist"

     

    you are good!

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  • Corrected

    Today's topic

    Today's topic we talked about was related to "terror".
    Frankly to say, it's a complex theme for an English beginner like me. I tried to explain some reasons which I regarded as the causes of "terror", for example, religion, poverty, nationality, etc. Furthermore, I introduced some samples of horrible attacks happened recently.
    Peace and safety are the basic requirements of human being. People who lived in an environment which is full of murder, robbery and hostility, will lose the confidence of his motherland.
    <Please help me to revise the article, thanks.>

     

    Correction:

    As long as you are giving informations you should use the present tense not the past:

    talked, talk

    was, is

    lived, live

     

     

    "frankly to say" , this is word by word translation use "frankly" or "honestly" instead.

     

    "theme" correct but you would better use "topic" or "subject" in this concext

    of human..., means part of human what you want to say is to the benefit of human so use "for"

    of "their" not "his", you are refering to people (plural)

    "motherland" = "homeland" or "homecountry" these are the most used

     

    good job anyway!

     

    Today's topic

    Today's topic we want to discuss is about "terror".
    Frankly, it's a complex topic for an English beginner like me. I try to explain some reasons which I regard as causes of "terror", for example, religion, poverty, nationality, etc. Furthermore, I introduce some samples of horrible attacks happened recently.


    Peace and safety are the basic requirements of human being. People who live in an environment which is full of murder, robbery and hostility, will lose the confidence of their homeland.

     

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    July 24, 2013
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  • Corrected

    ko6ka's notebook entry: Apr 21, 2011

    Ahlan wa sahlan!!
    Ana ismi Olya!
    Inta ismak ey? :D

     

    Inta ismak ey?  

     هذه ليست عربية فصحى الأحسن أن تقولي

    ما اسمك ؟

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