Raining

It's been raining for several days. I have a workmate who leaves her umbrella in the company. She gets wet when the next day arrives and she is so upset. So she tell us, " If you have an umbrella on a rainy day, (this part doesnt make sense). Then she complained to us and said, " People who have umbrellas around me, they do not have a warm heart. They watch me get all wet in the rain, but they don't even share their umbrella with me. I am so sad." But we wouldn't know unless you asked them. So we cant blame them. If you asked them, " Would you mind if we share the same umbrella please?" Then I think most people would be glad to. Especially to a beauty.

Instead of using the colon (:) to open the speech use what I call speech marks (") to open and close the speech. Other than that if you re-read your paragraph, you'll notice that you could easily correct the mistakes that I have corrected. That was a beautiful story though :) Good job!

Happy!!!

Today,I must write a composition to express the happiness in my heart.I am so happy that nothing will make me feel angry.Maybe you are curious about what makes me so excited.I will tell you that I have an interview to a lovely position. But I know I must calm down, so I can get ready for the job interview. OK. I have writen my mood. That's the end.