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    My day.

    Yesterday I studied for my English exam. It was very difficult for me, because it was with themes that I never learned. It was a level exam, so in the exam we had to use the present time, the past time and the future. I thought that it was good idea write something in a past time here. So I wrote this note, I'd like that you correct for me.
    I woke up this morning, and I thought "It's a good day", the day was nice. Somebody spoke to me, it was my Mom. She woke up very early because she went with my little sister to the school. I stood and I cleaned my face in my bath, then I took my breakfast. It was tea and bread with jam and cheese. After I cleaned my garden and I went to the shop. I bought meat and rice. I took the newspaper in the shop, a free newspaper (very interesting newspaper, they wrote about the politics in my city). I came to my house again and I prepared a mate and spoke with my mother while she cooked the food. Finally I'm here writing this note. Good bye!

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    July 4, 2013
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    I want the football season to start again!

    Ok. I know that football players like Messi or Cristiano Ronaldo shouldn't earn all that money and that the most of them don't give anything to charity. But they are exceptions. I do love football and I think it is a beautiful sport that teaches you a lot of things. And I also think that in these times of crisis, it can help you to get distracted and to not think about the same thing all the time . 

    So...please: dear football season : start again!

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    July 4, 2013
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    # 3 Failure is simply the opportunity to begin again, this time more intelligently. H.F.

    Many times people feel deeply sad, angry and frustrated because they fail in many things they try. I have felt many times like this as well. It´s very hard when I try to do something and after many attempts I fail. It´s hard when effort seems to not work as it should do; but I have learned that failure is simply the opportunity to begin again but more intelligently.

    I remember the process of choosing my final project theme. It was awful. I chose one and then the committee refused to approve it. So, I had to choose another and other which were rejected as well. My fellow was sad but I realized that when we got our theme rejected I chose a better one, so we were improving. In the end we chose one of the best themes from the faculty and it was awesome to see what we could do after so many failures.

    Every time you fail you have the choice to give up or to try again, this time with new knowledge and experiences that will help you to make fewer mistakes. I have read some stories of people who have failed so many times before getting what they wanted, people like Michael Jordan, Thomas Edison and others well known people who learned through their failures.

    In my opinion, failure is not a devil that is there to torment you but a guide to teach you what you should not do next time. If you are intelligent enough to get the meaning and lesson of failure you will be able to reduce to possibilities to fail in a specific area next time; so, at the end you will find the correct way to achieve your goal. The difference between a loser and a winner is not the amount of mistakes they make but the profits they obtain from those mistakes to.

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    July 4, 2013
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