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Josh Accent Coach
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Mar 15, 2015
I'm glad, and yes, I think it is improving. It comes out more naturally now.
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Mar 1, 2015
Very motivated student. Listens to advice given. Easy-going individual.
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    IELTS Essay Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits? Nowadays, it is an important question whether we should let our young children play computer games or they should be banned. While some people think it is fine for their children to play, others believe it is unacceptable. As far as I am concerned, the disadvantages of video games outweigh the advantages. First of all, the possible benefits of computer games should be mentioned. There are a wide range of games created for educational purposes, especially for the very young children. This allows kids to learn how to use modern computers as well as some new information from the educational game. Additionally, for youngsters, games can keep them from bad companies. They can simply sit home communicating with their friends and having fun instead. However, the number of drawbacks also takes place. Modern games are expensive and usually involve further purchases while the game is being played. Another aspect is the amount of time children spend on computer games. Instead of education and learning, kids waste hours online even without breaks, thereby influencing the condition of their health. The most considerable disadvantage in video games is cruelty. Although there are age limits, parents still buy such games for their infants. As we know, there have been a few cases when children took guns and shoot innocent people on the street. To sum up, although there are fun and educational games, the most of modern video games are violent and cruel, and this may have dreadful consequences. Therefore, I believe there are more drawbacks than benefits. (Please estimate my IELTS score.) Thank you.
    March 9, 2015
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    March 7, 2015
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    IELTS Essay It is widely known that the increasing world population has a great impact on our nature. There are a number of reasons for that, however, I believe it is quite possible to improve the situation if certain measures will be taken. Admittedly, cars’ emissions is one of the greatest problem in XXI century. Each year there are 300 000 more vehicles on the roads which lead to the enormous amount of CO2 emissions thereby leading to smog over cities, greenhouse effect and even global warming. Another major problem for us is an overreliance on fossil fuels like oil and gas. On the other hand it is an effective and cheap energy source, but on the other hand, during the extraction of them, environment is being seriously damaged. For example, when the shale gas is being made, the soil is spoiled and it can’t be used for farming purposes nor building. Moreover, the extracting of these types of fuel often require cutting down rainforest, which leads to the extinction of many species of animals and plants. Therefore, the solution is ought to be found. First of all, the government should campaign for new types of energy sources. Although the most part of people thinks it is impossible to produce electricity without coal, the scientists from Tokyo have found an extraordinary solution. They propose to generate electricity by using nuclear fusion reactor, which creates a vast amount of energy from the very cheap, safe and environmental friendly fuel. In addition, the garbage recycling campaign should be introduced. This will save millions of square kilometers of forest. Such campaigns have been already introduced in several countries and they seem to work even better than expected. Lastly, to decrease the amount of emissions government could encourage buyers by reducing taxes and fees. However everyone is obliged to take care of our planet. Therefore try not to use car on daily basis if there is an option of public transport. You will avoid traffic jams and will be able to read a newspaper on your way to job. You can also try bicycle, it will improve you well being as well as the atmosphere in your city. To sum up, I believe government must campaign for modern energy sources, however It is crucial for everyone to act reasonably in order to save nature. (I thought it will be shorter. I guess if I had 250-300 words my band will be higher?) (Please estimate my IELTS score.)
    March 6, 2015
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    IELTS Essay Certain people believe that to improve people's physical condition more gyms and similar infrastructural objects have to be built. Opponents state that these actions will not be productive and other actions have to be made. In my opinion, although sport facilities are increasingly gaining in popularity, they can not noticeably affect the population's health. Initially, it is obvious that gyms have always been a decent alternative to night clubs or bars, considering that youngsters are often visitors there. The British Association of Doctors stated that 80% of jobs involves sitting in the office. As we know, our ancestors did a lot of physical work during their lives. Therefore we ought to visit fitness centers to load ourselves with exercises, otherwise you will be weak and may be even taken ill. The main problem is, the growing number of these facilities does not mean that more visitors will come. Moreover, there are other important aspects of well being. For example, a proper diet without red meat and sugar might be healthier than a morning jog. The government should pay more attention on advertising healthful organic groceries thereby reducing a consumption of food full of chemicals and pesticides. Secondly, the concept of fit lifestyle has to be introduced and become a compulsory part of school education. Lastly, to prevent addictions and improve public health prices on alcohol and tobacco products may be increased. In conclusion, to improve public health objects such as swimming pools, stadiums and gyms are required. However other measures focused on healthy diet, advertising organic food or proper education will be more beneficial. Please rate if you know the IELTS marking rules. Basically any proper corrections and pieces of advice are desired though.
    March 2, 2015
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