The practice of present perfect
The Conversation Between Lovers
Girl: Have you ever loved other girls as much as me.
Boy: No, I have never loved girls more than you.
Girl: Really? I am glad to hear that. I had
never asked you this question because I had been afraid of your answer.
Boy: Oh, no. Trust me. I have never lied to you.
Girl: By the way, I received this message "I have never loved girls more than you." from you at this morning, but "to Mary" is written on
it. I am not Mary but Emma.
Your verb forms seem good! Don't be afraid to use more contractions, which sound more natural. For example, try "I'd never asked you" instead of "I had never asked you." Both are technically correct though.
The Conversation on the Telephone
A: I have just arrived in Japan. I am so happy.
B: I have just finished eating lunch. So, I will go to pick you up soon. Where are you now?
A: I am at the Tokyo station. Oh, it has just started raining, so can you bring me an umbrella to me?
B: Yes. Can you wait for about an hour?
A: Yes, I have not eaten lunch yet. I will wait for you while eating lunch.
B: Oopsie. I have already finished eating lunch. I wanted to eat lunch with you, because you would treat me.
Many of these sentences need no correction! good job! Watch out for word order and common English expressions. "can you bring an umbrella to me" is not always incorrect structure, but it sounds more natural to say "can you bring me and umbrella."
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