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    The dating program

    Today the topic we discussed most on sina weibo is the TV dating program, Dating on Saturday, which is very famous in Shanghai. Because ("We discussed this a lot because") All the male participants on today's program come from our corporation. That means we are colleagues. Although the same corporation, they work in different areas ( "departments"). Some are IT engineers, some work on engineering design and some are in administrative positions.

    During the program, many interesting and funny things happened. We couldn't stop laughing when watching the program. However, the result was quite dramatic. A few boys and girls changed their minds when they made the final decisions. Love is always like this, it gives us surprises and something unexpected. ("Love always gives us surprises and unexpected outcomes")

    Some friends ask me why I did not take part in the program. Actually, I am single and available now, but the number of participants ("the number of available spots for participants") was limited. I (thought I) should save the opportunity for my elder colleagues. I belive she (who? You should not use a pronoun as you have not mentioned 'her' before, maybe you could say "that special girl" or "that special someone") will appear in my life.

     

     

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    Great job! The comments I put in brackets are my suggestions to make the story flow more naturally, it doesn't necessarily mean what you said was grammatically wrong. It's very interesting how popular dating shows are on Chinese TV. 加油!

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    June 29, 2013
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    “A Walk to Remember”

     

    OH, i I just watched a movie called <"A Walk to Remember"> Chinese name<初恋的回忆>.
    I can'tcouldn't believe that this movie also is had a tragic ending.
    Last week, that I also watched a movie called <"If Only">, which also is had a tragic ending.
    (Despite their tragic endings...) But both are good movies.


    We are love like the wind,can't see that and feel that.
    Why ? why not let me see a happy ending ?? <em>(i don't really understand the last two sentences. Could you explain? 你可以用中文说明)</em>

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    <em>I have also watched 'A Walk to Remember', and it's a good movie! Did you cry?</em>

     

     

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    June 29, 2013
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    1. None of us would expect to see the president at the party.


    2. Although being punctual himself, the professor was quite used to students being late for his class.

    3. A good number of proposals were raised by the delegates as expected.

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    June 24, 2013
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    June 24,2013 Outlet malls

    Today I went to Vaughan Mills Outlet Mall. Before leaving, I searched the traffic route via Google Maps. I first took the subway to Finch Station then walked to the bus transfer terminal. I took the "760 YRT" Bus to Vaughan Mills and which was about a 30 minute ride.

    The Vaughan Mills Outlet malls is a large shopping mall. I browsed the entire mall in one afternoon so my feet are now very tired. They have many famous branded products which are very cheap, however, the disadvantage is that normally the clothes and shoe sizes are too big, so even if you like something they might not have your size. I will go again next time.

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    June 24, 2013
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