Mi vida
Los primeros tres meses vivo que viví en China es fue defícil porque yo no hablo hablaba chino, no estaba familiarizada con el lugar. etcétera Pero cuando supera superé todas las dificultades, mi vida aquí es mejor mejoró.
Explenation:
Hi! I only speak some English but I'll try to explain my corrections.
First: the time you used. The more appropiate time is simple past at first: "Viví", "fue", "superé" and "mejoró" are in simple past. "Hablaba" and "estaba" are imperfect.
In Spanish we don't use capital letters for lenguages, like in English.
"Etcétera" is not necessary in this case, because you need to enumerate more options.
Even though English and Spanish has some similarity, they're actually really different lenguages. So my advice is not use English as a guide to learn Spanish :P