Indonesia

I come from Indonesia

what do you think about Indonesia..
people, culture, foods, etc.
or governments?

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I corrected Indonesia because it is a country, so it should start with a capital letter =)

My party!

Yesterday, I gone to a party with my friend David. He studies english with me at university. He wanted to be introduced to Lucy who he fancied. David and I sat in the corner of the room. He didn't make the first move to go and see her. He waited for so long to tell her that he had a crush on her. He took a drink to get some energy and after a few minutes of endless hesitation, he walked to her. David remained mute. She gave a hint of a smile, noticing David blushing. She asked him if he enjoyed the party. He whispered ' Yes ' and had a glance at me. I winked at him. That was it. Feeling reassured and confident, he told her which feelings he was experiencing. She suddenly sullened fell silent. She looked embarrassed. She could hardly say a word but after alittle seconds, she said : ' I'm sorry to deceive you but actually I fancy Sebastian ' . David fainted : ' a friend in need is a friend indeed ' !

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introduction myself and the future plans,please correction my writing, thanks a lot.

My name is oky ikhramullah, i come from ABDYA and i have a simple family, i have mother and my father has died, then I have one brother and one sister, his age is 23 years old and my sister is 25 years old, i love my family, my brother have finished studying in the Unsyiah Universty and my sister too. i have many hobbies like Swimming, Football, listening the to music and read the books, I love reading book about the science, it is very interesting for me and im often swimming too because it is can be make me healthy. Sometimes i am also playing football at the Tugu yield in Unysiah Darussalam. And I love listening to music, i like Green day, Jason Mras, and Maher Zain, thier songs is are very good. I like speak english cause english language is very important, many books has are written in english language because that english language is too important. And now i am studying about geophysical engineering in the unsyiah university, I really like the science of geophysics because it's very interesting and challenging, moreover geophysical sciences also have good prospects for the future in which humans require a source of energy for life on the earth. Geophysics are also learning about the working mechanism of the earth like an Earthquake, Tsunami, Volcanic eruption, et cetera. This is a little thing that I tell about the Geophysic.
By the way My I have so many future plans so many, First I want to learn the English language and then I will improve my English further. And I hope I can finish my study to long in 4 years, after I have finished my study S1 I will to continue my study to abroad for master and I am too hoping I can get the title of professor tittle and then I would apply for a job in the oil and gas company in overseas, many the things I want to learn next and now I have to prepare like learn the english language, Japanese and I also studied the German language so that later I could work in the Germany and live there, I also have a lot of interaction with strangers through Waplog, Facebook, Wechat and the site that I like the most is Italki, Italki site is a site that I think is very good because there we can learn various foreign languages and directly from them and there we can also teach others to speak our language, Italki is web educational and is one of the great and exciting.
The future i want to get married with a good woman and I sincerely hope I have a good family. I love travelling because that i wish i visit many countries and meet other people and know thier culture. I would like to live abroad like Qatar, German or Japan. please correct. :D

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