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    The global percentages and distribution of wealth by region The bar graph describes the proportion of population and global wealth by region. As can be seen from the graph, the population percentage and distribution of wealth of each region are not correlate. As shown in the graph, North Ameria, Europe and the rich Asia - Pacific countries, which respectively make up 35%, 30%, 25% of the global wealth are the three richest region in the world. Meanwhile, the proportion of global wealth of the last five region: China, the other Asia Pacific countries, Latin Ameriac and Carribbean, India and Africa is considerably low. Despite constituting just about 4% of the global wealth, China is the crowdest region in the world with its share of the wold's population is just under 25%. The other Asia Pacific countries, India and Europe account for almost the same proportion of the global population at about 15%. The population percentages of North America, Africa and Latin America and the Caribbean are the least ( 6%, 10%, 8% respectively).
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    Bar-chart.

    1. The bar-chart describes the information about the trend of tourism in Harbour City in 1970, 1985 and 2000.
    2. As can be seen from the chart, Adventure tourism rose from the trough 20% in 1970 to peak of 50 % in 2000.
    3. Percentage peaked at close to 90% is City hotel occupancy.
    4. In 2000, total number of tourists moving by rail reached a low 25 percent while total number of tourists traveling by air reached a peak of 80 %
    5. The coastal hotel occupancy decrease from 90% in 1985 to 15% in 2000.
    6. The air travel peaked at almost 75 % in 2000
    7. The rail travel derease from almost 60% in 1970 to 25 % in 2000.

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