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¿Qué tal? La Historia de Lau'ren'tay
Hola a todos los demás. Mi nombre es Lau'ren'tay, estoy desde en / vivo en (without "estoy") los Estados Unidos y
estoy tengo 22 años. Yo sido aprendizaje español por 1 año desde la último años en Abril. Llevo aprendiendo español 1 año, desde Abril del año pasado.
Yo nunca destinado o pensamiento de había pensado aprender español, porque originalmente yo estaba destinado en (If you went for your job, this is better) / estaba viviendo en saliendo a Reikavik,Islandia. La mayoría de los la gente habla inglés hay allí.
Tan yo estaba no saliendo Yo no estaba interesado en aprender islandés, incluso aunque ("incluso" and "aunque" both are correct, but you should use only one, It´s better!) es un bello idioma en mí opinión. Sin embargo, yo no estaba interesado en el aprendizaje de cualquier ningún idiomas al todo. E en ese momento de mi vida .Pero algunas cosas han sucedido financieramente, eso ha hecho cambiar /ha cambiado mis planes (both are correct, you choose!)/cambiar mí plans y mi vida.0 votedJune 1, 20131- Ideas to have a better year. If you can, you correct me, please! Last year, I did somethings to improve my life. For instance, I went to the gym ( at this moment, I go on at the gym). Secondly, I changed my diet to feel better, I eat a lot of vegetables, fruits...and I try not to eat fatty/grease food .( I don´t know). Last month, I went to a fantastic house in the mountais, because sometimes you need to forget, and you need to not to think in the job, or other problems. This year, I will go on doing these things. But probably, I must not use so much my car, since it´s not good for the environment. I have started to teach Maths. My neighbours´son needs help with it, and why not? I think I should take some money for poor people. What about you? What do you need to have a better year? I look forward your answer!June 1, 201380
- Writing to practise my English. Could you correct me, please! Your next travelling to XXX I´m going to tell you about the charm of XXX. XXX is an spectacular, amazing, appealing...city. It has a lot of things to visit, for this reason, it´s very difficult to choose any one. I love XXX. Therefore, I´m eager to write about it. In XXX, there are many places with a lot of history, and there are many modern places too. You choose it! I like very much to go for a walk to a park in the centre of the city , called XXX. There, there is a very big pond with goldfish. Moreover, you can sail in a boat. You can find little monuments as well...and all around you is green. If you like the trees, you must go there, because there are many kinds of them. Also, XXX has got Al´s cathedral. It´s amazing! In this cathedral is where our prince “F” married. It is a bit history in XXX. And If you want to enjoy, you should go to Theme Park. I know you have got another in your city, but this is different! There are a lot of restaurants and very funny attractions! I wish you could enjoy it!June 1, 201370
- Could you correct me, please! I don´t know whether I use well the modals or not! Dear friend, I regarding to you for your problem to sleep well. You should try to sleep only when you are sleepy. If you go the bed, and you can´t sleep, you should stand up and, I think you must read a book or a magazine, or you must listen to classical music, and you do it on a comfortable seat. It´s to relax you! You try not to drink drinks which could put you nervious. In addition, don´t dinner too much. You must procure that when you will be on your bed, you have to be good. Go you to a gym!. With the exercise you feel tired. I try to do all these things to sleep better, and they help me! Sleeping is very important in the life, because If you sleep bad, you feel tired all the day. I hope that these things could help you to sleep. I look forward your answer!June 1, 2013130
Yo odio esperar por teléfono
Espero a harlar para hablar con una persona de la compañía de teléfonos. He esperado por durante quatro cuatro minutos y no me gusta ha gustado para nada. Tengo una pregunta simple que es muy facíl fácil para de responder. No supporto soporto las compañías que dan mal servicio. Pero que hago? jajaja. Esta bien, voiy voy a estar bien. :D
0 votedMay 31, 20130- You and a friend are planning a trip to England and want to go for a walk in London.Correct me,pleas Dear friend, I have been seeing the different places to go for a walk in London. I believe that “Park walk” will be the best option., becuase we love the nature. In addition, we adore to see free animals ( animals in free). It´s the largest route of them. Therefore, we can walk more. We will see the pretties flowers, and in this season is all green!. I hope we can see many animals, and I wish we could touch them as well!. It will be amazing, shall we? We could do a picnic there. We will prepare our food or we can buy takeaway there!. The others routes are fantastic too, but I would like sightseeing other days. This routes are to see historic monuments, Romans´church... in general ( generally) London´s history. I want to do them as well, but first, I would like to walk in Richmond Park. Are you agree with me? I look forward your answer soon!May 31, 201300
- Could you correct me, please? I´m training for my english exam! Pop Music Festival in Madrid Last week, I went to a Pop Music Festival, and I´m going to tell you about this. As I see it, I believe that the best parts in the Festival were when the dancers did a spectacular and amazing performance with fluorescent paint. They switch off the lights, and we only saw the bright paint. It was awesome! Other important moment was when “XXX” appeared. It was incredible and excited!. All the people who where in the performance sang her songs with her. And the other hand, I think that the worst part was when we wanted to eat, because we were hungry!. There weren´t any places to eat, nothing!. If you didn´t take your food, you had a seriusly problem! In my opinion, the bands and singers that played there, they were perfects!. Their performances liked very much. Moreover, the lights effects were gorgeous!. The audience enjoyed a lot, include me!. I was eager here! If you can go the next year, I recommend you it!May 31, 201330
- Could you correct me, please? Tell me whether I have used "must" and "have to" correctly. Is good the discipline? I´m going to tell you about the news rules in “A” school. The rules that the students have to follow are a quite hard: First, they have to wait to their teachers to go to the class, in the second place, they must wear an uniform, in addition, they have to have a good look ( the hair, shoes...), third, the students mustn´t use their mobile phone in class. Also, they can´t go to a fast-food restaurant for lunch, and last but not least, if they don´t do their homework, they have to stay when the class finish. In the school have had many changes, for instance, the building is more new, it has more money for sports activities and for improving the teaching. Moreover, the students is going to the bests universities now. As I see, the school has got better, but maybe the rules are too severes, since in “A” school there are little children as well.May 30, 201380
Vacación Vacaciones
Este vacaciónEstas vacaciones no tengo mucho tiempo libre. Estudie, estudie estudieEstudiar, estudiar, estudiar. ¡Ayyyy! ¿Por qué me odio a mi misma? Quiero dormir. . . nadar, jugar. Los estudios son muy ¡¡¡aburridos!!! . . . no. Es un una mentira. De veras, me gustan los estudios. La El problema es que estoy muy cansada. La escuela el pasado año es fué muy agotadora. La vacación es Las vacaciones son para descansar pero necesito más clases más este semestre que viene. Pero me parece que hay mucho para por hacer. Ahhh, quiero dormir ahora (ya). Sí, esa es muy buena.
0 votedMay 29, 20132Ejercicios - con el subjuntivo (correcciones)
Necesito que tú me ayudes
Hace falta que el gobierno ayude a más gente
Hace falta que hable mucho español
Es posible que vayas a visitar a tus padres
Es imposible que vaya al banco en dos minutos
Es probable que vayamos en autobús
Es probable que llueva esta tarde
Es improbable que nieve en el verano
Es improbable que ella salga esta noche
Es necesario que hagas tu tarea antes de que te/de que vayas al cine
Es difícil que hagamos una buena impresión sin ropa bonita
Es importante que VW haga un coche sin gasolina
Es importante que me cepille los dientes cada día
Es bueno que esté en tenga buena salud
Es bueno que tengas suficiente dinero
Es bueno que ellos vivan cerca del aeropuerto
Es malo que él fuma y bebe fume y beba
Es mejor que empiece temprano (pronto) con mi trabajo
Es fácil que venga a este llegue a esta conclusión
Es difícil que pase el examen si no estudies estudio (yo), estudia (él/ella)
Gracias por sus correcciones!0 votedMay 29, 20131
