I would criticize your question but to flat out condemn would be deplorable! Don't denounce me just yet. Let me explain... :) I'll give you my definition, not so much a dictionary definition of each: Criticize: to find fault with something/someone and to tell them about it. Generally, criticism is negative in nature. In the US, we have a term called 'constructive criticism' which means you're asking someone to give you honest feedback even though it might not be what you want to hear (negative). ex: Criticize me all you'd like but i'm going to college regardless of what you say!! Condemn: To judge and to sentence someone to something. Another negative one. It brings on the sense of hopelessness and sadness. :( ex: You're condemned to live out the rest of your miserable existence in Hell! Deplore: I don't use this one very often but I think it means unattractive and undesirable. It's also negative in it' usages. ex: It's deplorable to hit your wife. (that's not a very good example... but it's the best i've got) Denounce: If you denounce someone, you call them out on something or challenge their authority. You're making a point or suggesting something that you feel is wrong with the thing you're denouncing. It's telling someone they're wrong! ex: I denounce your opinion!

new story part1

It is a story that I want translated from Persian to English. Please correct my mistakes! :D

It was Christmas and the weather was cold and snowy.

شب کریسمس بود و هوا، سرد و برفی .
While the boy's bare feet crossed the snow until maybe the cold snow made his trip terrible. His face was sewed (?) on cold glass of story and looked in to story. (story like a book? reading a book?)

In his gaze somthing stirred. Such as with his look, he asked which everything he hasn't... Such as with his eyes did wish. 

 

Is this one a poem? It's pretty but a little tough to follow.

پسرک، در حالی‌که پاهای برهنه‌اش را روی برف جابه‌جا می‌کرد تا شاید سرمای برف‌های کف پیاده‌رو کم‌تر آزارش بدهد، صورتش را چسبانده بود به شیشه سرد فروشگاه و به داخل نگاه می‌کرد .

در نگاهش چیزی موج می‌زد، انگاری که با نگاهش ، نداشته‌هاش رو از خدا طلب می‌کرد، انگاری با چشم‌هاش آرزو می‌کرد .

tanks

About my spoken english

English is always a problem for me. Spoken English is like a montain that's hard to climb. When i talk with foreigners, i can't understand what they talk about.