Recommended places in my hometown

My hometown is in Chengdu- the capital of Sichuan province, China. If a friend visited my hometown, I would recommend that he visit two places.
First, the Chunxi Road may be is the place showing  that showcases the modernity and fashion of Chengdu. It is in the center of the city. There are many shops and a mall in [American English: on] this road. If my friend went to this road, him/her he would come to understand what Chengdu is like todaythe nowadays of Chengdu.
Next, we can compare Chunxi Road to Kuanzhai Lane, which represents the old times of Chengdu. Kuanzhai lane was is composed by of three lanes- the broad lane, the narrow lane and the well lane. These lanes were built 300 years ago during the Qing dynasty, which would illustrate the history of this city [?? How does the Qing Dynasty "illustrate the history of the city"?]. Today, a lot folk artisans and handicraftsmen are located have shops here to demonstrate and sell their artworks. And Additionally, folk performers demonstrate the local folk art. So Kuanzhai Lane is worth a visit.
If my friend disliked spicy food, I would not recommend him/her going that he go to the a hotpot restaurant, because most of them are only good at spicy hotpot dishes which is are full of chili.

Chengdu is a wonderful place, the beauty of which will be found by taste softly. [taste softy? I'm not sure what you mean.]

Hey Luobo, good job!

Two tips: aviod using "her/him" or "he/she". Pick either he or she and use it throughout your writing. In informal speech, you can also use "they" if you do not know the gender of the person you are talking about. 

Also, the last part about hotpot restaurants was a little confusing. You recommended that your friend go to two places: Kuanzhai Lane and Chunxi Road. Are the restaurants at both places? Or are they somehwhere else?

:)