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    My Essay 9

    Sometimes going outdoors for a walk or a long-distance cycle is a good thing. One can gain many good experiences outwith the day to day grind.

    Last Sunday, I went for a long distance cycle with my good friends. We were talking and looking around while we made our way. The early spring wind was kind and comfortable. We arrived three and a half hours after we had begun. We arrived in the centre of another city which is relatively near the one where we all live. We didn't bring much food to eat, just a few snacks.We were very suprised to find that there was a Rosa Chinesis exhibit and the exhibit was about to begin. It was only a couple of minutes cycle away, we decided to go there and after we arrived we found a cool place to store our bikes so we could attend the exhibit.

     

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    a report about the fog haze in northern china

    It's been reported that most areas of northern china have been covered in persistent, thick fog in recent days; the national meteorological station has issued the highest orange alert ,calling on people to wear masks to prevent air pollution.
      The French painter Monet once said that 'without the fog, London wouldn't be a beautiful city'. However, few Londoners would have agreed with this view at the time of the Industrial Revolution as the city was continiously choked with industrial smoke. An impending crisis behind such a beautiful backdrop can be easily ignored; the formation and impact of fog are far less attractive than it's appearance. The haze, combined with pollutions and moisture in the air, is one of the chief culprits of traffic jams and respiratory disease,damaging life and health. 
     The large amount of pollutants; coal-fired,vehicle emissions,industrial pollutants and dust, coupled with a negative attitude amoungst local officials towards environmental protection policy has had a negative impact on the environment.
     The environmental protection policy has been published for years. However, the importance of protecting the environment has attracted minimal attention,while it's significance should really play a central role in  the daily life of everyone. Cycling and walking should be promoted over the use of private cars. It's also crucial for government to take specific actions to control pollution levels and to provide leadership in promoting greener and cleaner activities.
     We all need the air in order to survive, looking after it will ensure a pure and bright future. We must not let the fog darken our way to success, good health and a happy home.

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