我总是觉得我还徘徊在童年的状态(The means of '还在' and '还' are the same, but there is another '在' in this sentence. This will make the whole sentence sound strange.)

最近我发现我跟我的同辈没什么共同的话题。每一个人（'每一个' can be used as an adj. but seldomly a noun.）都有自己想达到的目标，想追求的梦想。 

我的梦想就是想投入在我的卡通世界里(I can feel what you want to say, roughly. But is it 'you want contribute youself in the field of cartoon' or 'live in the world of cartoon created by youself'. I think they are different.)。白天的时候，我是一个平面设计师。但是下了班之后，我最期待的事(最期待的 is an adj.)是回家。在我自己的空间里(We hardly use a single '在'. '在' often matchs with other prep. such as '上','中'.)可以画我最喜爱的俄罗斯套娃娃。在我的计划里(This sentence can be deleted, as it is not a whole sentence.)，虽然我的计划目前来说是有一点模糊，也没有看得太清楚('也' means also, so this sentence use '我的计划' as the subject.)，但是我总是很想继续往前走。

why do you hate pineapple? color? taste? shape? 

I think it is full of juice and delicious

Maybe there is something wrong with my throat

I feel not well today,and always sneeze. I think maybe I will catch a cold beacuse of the constantly changing weather.

kindle, it is more professional if you only read e-books

A place filled with love and hope. No one will hurt me and complain.