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    尴尬的时刻

     

    你在是漂亮的女人漂亮。

    是的,你。

    我昨天看见了你昨天。

    你是了穿着那件可爱红色的裙子穿着。

    你是很漂亮。

    我相恋想念昨天与你——漂亮的女人起舞时的曼妙何时我看见你舞蹈同你的女人漂亮昨天。

    近距离与你的眼睛神交流辐射的。

    我不看见卢瑟的绿色中国人以往。你是塑造我热。(这两句理解不了。。。I can't understand the two sentences。。。)

    对不起。

    漂亮的女人让我心跳加速使得慌。

    我可以与请你喝一杯吗?

    我可以你跳舞了吗?

    啊!

    你的皮肤是如此的柔软。

    你用洗液吗?(这句话实在理解不了了。。。I can't understand this sentence too。。。)

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    May 1, 2013
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    April 30, 2013
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    在中国,我应该旅游到什么地方旅游?

     

    我在北京工作以后,我想去要旅游。8月,我要2个星期计划旅游2个星期.

    我应该要去哪里?

    我知道我想去到广西和香港。也可能是云南(或是“也想去云南”)。我觉得南中国比北中国更漂亮。

    我想要去四川,可是现在不好因为有一个地震可是那里刚刚地震过,现在去不是时候。我觉得黄龙也很漂亮。

    当然我要去上海。


    在中国,有很多的地方很有意思(“有很多很有意思的地方”这样说比较好)。可是我只有2个星期!

    你觉得的最好的地方是什么哪里?

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    April 30, 2013
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    Will E-books replace Traditional Books? With the development of the technology , the E-books is finded anywhere . Compare with traditional books , E-books has its own advantages . According to this , so many people think it will be replaced traditional books . E-books is convenient to carry and get it only for a little cost or for free . If you download it when you find you didn't like it , you can delete with your finger . And not worry about how consumed you are . But there are still so many people support the traditional books . Because when people read the written words on papers , they can feel peaceful , reall and put themselves into the books . Besides this , we can set marks or refer to some important paragraphs immediately . And it can't hurt your eyesight seriously . In my opinion , E-books will be a popular way to the quick rhythm society . But traditional books will still exist to the people which like carefully read and have a leisure time . With different ways to pull the society forward , but not to PK which is the best .
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    我想交朋友

     

    我喜欢中文。
    你想我是让我成为你的朋友吗?
    我想是会成为你的朋友和或老师。
    我喜欢中国的女生。
    中国女生,你愿意交谈同我交流吗?
    哈哈哈,我是笨蛋。
    它更好你不交谈同我。 这会不会让你更喜欢与我交谈呢?(我觉得你应该是这个意思)
    谢谢。
    再见。
    长期居住的美国。(你是想表达你离开美国了,还是想说你长期住在美国呢?)

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    April 28, 2013
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    音乐 27/4

     

    我真的很喜欢音乐。整天我整天听音乐。如果我用电脑或者聊跟朋友聊天,我还在听音乐。我也练习吉他。我去过很多音乐会。我最喜欢的乐队是Metallica. 并且我还有看见了他们的音乐会。

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    April 28, 2013
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    April 28, 2013
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    你的可爱眼睛

     

    你有可爱的眼睛。
    你的眼睛像月亮一样漂亮。
    你的眼睛闪耀,有着可爱的棕色。
    我喜欢亲吻你的脸,凝望着你的眼睛。
    请你来吻我。
    可爱的笨蛋(你应该是要表达这个意思吧)。

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    April 28, 2013
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    我大学的一年完成(correct:我完成了一年的大学)

    我今天<em>胖</em>我的朋友搬出宿舍(???maybe you want to say:今天陪我的朋友搬出宿舍or今天我的胖朋友搬出宿舍),我很傷心。我<em>大学</em>的第一年已經結束了。夏天即將到來,我不想上学。我想睡覺和玩電腦。

    Punctuation marks have its own meaning.A comma means one talk isn't over,a full stop means one talk is over.So when you express your roommate move away your dormitory,you are broken-hearted,between the two words should be a comma.My English is not good,but I think you will understand my meaning.

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    April 28, 2013
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