(41) I truly want to improve my English writing skills and I'd love to have your help!

I still remember the day when I was walking slowly all the way home with tears flooding out of my eyes after being mocked. What on the earth brought them to my eyes? I guess my pride was hurt too much. Actually, I had already started to study in advance from during the winter vacation. It's It wasn't for my personal goal but for my father's who wanted to see me studying. One day, my stern father gently asked me to study and his such attitude moved changed my my mind. First, I needed some textbooks to take up studies study with. However, I could not ask him for money because our family was under financial hardship. Fortunately, this problem was easily solved.

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After I was mocked, I walked slowly all the way home with tears flooding out of my eyes. What on earth made me cry so hard? Probably, it was because my pride might be injured. Actually, I had already begun to study since the winter vacation. I had no real goals, instead, to please a father who wanted to see me study. One day my father begged me to study and feeling sorry, I finally gave way to his pleas. There was a problem ,though, I needed some textbooks. However, I couldn't ask him for money, since we went were going through financial difficulties. Fortunately, I was able to solve this problem easier than expected.

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