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Hi, i'm JunXie form China, I am looking for someone who can speak English fluently.
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    A composition for IETLS task 1 The given two pie charts compare the proportion of males and females arrested and the bar chart give the information about why they were arrested in 1994. As we can see immediately that the arrested males,who accounted for 32% of total females,is 21% more than females,who accounted for 9%.Public drink was the main reason why men and women were arrested(almost 38% and 31%,respectively).There was substantial difference in the proportion of the two sex arrested because of drink driving.In addition,the greater percentage of women than men were arrested for these reasons such as public drinking,assault.By contrast,there was a smaller percentage of women than men arrested by police because of drink driving, breach of order,theft and other reasons.It is also interesting to note that there were also some women(approximately 6%)and men(around 5%)who refused to answer the reasons why they were arrested. Overall,public drinking was the main reason why the two sex were arrested.Some provisions should be taken to restrict it.
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    yes, especially the permission of Taiwan is more stringent. Why you asked the question?
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    我非常担心我的朋友

    我非常担心我的朋友。我有把握(肯定)她得了厌食症。她太瘦了。说真的,她不(仅)瘦,而是(简直是)瘦骨嶙峋。他(她)的样子瘦得像骷髅一样。每天都她的身体越来越虚弱。最近她不能正常地行动。在家里走(动)的时候,她需要把家具当成(作为)支撑物。她没有精力(精神),总是很累。她(的衣服)穿得太大了。衣服从身体垂下来,像一个麻袋一样。

    当我们一起吃饭的时候,她吃得非常慢,而且从来没吃(够完)整顿饭。比如说,曾(经)我们定购了披萨饼。我,她的男友,她的女儿和她女儿的女友都吃完了两,三个片,还有吃完了一个玉米棒子,但是他(她)只吃了两个很小的口。然后她把她的食物用薄膜覆盖了(盖上了),再放在微波炉。她说她稍后就会吃。两天后我在微波炉里找(仍然看)到了它。她依然没吃它。我们都上当了。

    昨天我跟她的男友聊聊。他跟我说,尝试让她吃饭很累,他也很担心她。我们不知道该怎么办。我们不可以用力推让(强迫)她吃饭,而且她不要(肯)承认她有问题。我不想逼她,但是这情况很严重。不用说每次我们试试跟他说这件事,她总是生气我们(生我们的气)。我也害怕要是我逼她,她不再做我的朋友。我不知道如何帮助她。如果你是我的话,你会怎么办?

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