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About Today 4

Good evening.

Today I talked with my friend of Chinese Chinese friend on Skype.
Even though a little trable trouble occurred, we were able to talk and <em>hear</em> <em>(understand?)</em> everything each other, so
I had a very good time. I want to talk with her again soon. 

Recently It has been cold since three days ago.
It seems that the temperature of recent is as cold as has been cold because it's March.
Spring, please hurry up and come get here!

Thank you for reding reading.

Good evening.

Today I talked with my Chinese friend on Skype.

Even though a little trouble occured, we were able to speak and understand each other, so I had a very good time. I want to talk with her again soon.

It has been cold since three days ago.

It seems that the temperature has been cold because it's March.

Spring, please hurry up and get here!

Thank you for reading.