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Imagine a story (please correct)
Guy went to his duty job as usual and Doris applied for a job at the Foreign Office. Her chances to get the job were rather good, but of course she was excited. In the evening when she and, and her friend, Guy had dinner, she told Guy him about what she had done during her job interview. Her new boss was very kind and he had taken her on.
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0 votedApril 4, 20132Share my dream
When I was a little girl, I enjoyed watching sports on TV.
I like watching the athletes fly through the playground like an eagle. I loved to see Chinese athletes running with the national flag and singing the national song. It’s such a honor to me. I feel proud of them. I wish I could be an athlete one day, too!
Everyday I run for 30 minutes. It was very tiring at first, I wanted to give up! Thinking about the honor it would bring to my class and even to my school made me make up my mind to carry on until I succeeded.
In school, I finally won three gold metals for my class! When my teacher praised me, my classmates hugged me, and everyone was cheering for me. I felt as I was the happiest girl in the world! Still, I need to work hard and keep going to make great progress.
As you can see, this is my dream.0 votedApril 4, 20130
