Is this text about a trip to Maldivas correct? It is a text about a trip to Maldivas.

Hi Karen!
I´m writing to tell you about my holiday in Maldivas. Last Monday my husband and I me leaved left from Barajas airport to Amsterdam, here we had only a one-hour an hour stopover to change the flight to Nairobi. We achieved arrive arrived on time alhought it was very stressful. In Nairobi after a six-hour stopover we flyed to Male. We went to the hotel in a typical boat called Dhoni. It was so exciting! We could saw a kind of inoffensive shark for humans beause it only eats little fishs fishes and placton. This kind of shark is called shark whole. Our room is was on the Indian Ocean and the floor is was of glass. It´s was fantastic, we can could (or saw) see the clear water of the sea under our feet!. November is the best time to travel here (the place) beacause the average temperature is about 26ºC and there isn´t no rain, so it´s a bit expensive. The waiters and barman speaks speak ( because you are writing about more than a person) English and there are a lot of Italian people. We done enjoyed snorkel, fishing and sunbathe on the white sands. Had you ever thought to be in a deserted island? I thought it in several times and finally I Could do (it not required)!
Karen, you should visit this place bacause it´s worth visiting.

I´ll see you soon.

Kisses and hugs.

Susana