My village festivities. Can anyone check my essay please? I would be eternally grateful!Thanks a lot

Some festivities are celebrated in a particular way in my village. However, one of our festivities has become a good opportunity to have fun while dressing all sorts of costumes. But it has also become the perfect excuse to get drunk, and this is what I think people enjoy most sorrowfully.

I really have to admit that the village looks like magic and mysterious. All the streets are filled up with bonfires at night on January 16th in my village, which keeps its numerous red and hot eyes widely opened the whole night, as well as its inhabitants who remain awake until the sun rises. During this fabulous and particular night they wear costumes, with which they walk around the village from one bonfire to the other. In addition, they drink, and eat besides the flames to keep warm.

After a few days, you can still see some people who haven´t put their fires out, because there is some wood left which they want to consume according what they say. But the real reason is probably that they feel like having more fun. Finally, when they stifle their fires and there are no more than ashes, they want them to become a phoenix, they want the next year to come fast desperately in order to start over new and enjoy this magnificent festivity, which brings: joy, hangover, and also some arguments between the neighbors.