Fan fiction - help Book one shadow Part 0ne 1 About Play of monsters and games of tyrants Storm over Castle Nocturn rage from thousands of years, but today its fury seem to be hundred times more dread. Dark waters of Sea of Storm wrathfully leash basal shores. Continuously striking thunders causes that normally gloomy land though can one time experience some thru light. Some will think what causes this wrath of elements, but here did not live many, who think about anything. Unimaginable big structure from glass-smooth basalt crouch like over sea like spider, silent and inert... waiting. In heart of timeless fortress is located chamber, that is full of guest, first time from thousands of years. Master of castle was happy because of it. Spider. third lord of shadow known once as Thomas Blake twist his lipless mouth in thing that can be with some imagination described as smile. - How magnificent company i gathered at my modest doorstep He was creature locking similar to human. Skinny like skeleton dug from ancient tomb, with skin thick like paper. seems to be too fragile to move. Few mortals and hundreds of his victims know how deceiving can be it. His limbs have more joints that humans, where bended in unnatural angle. Legs also where strange, ended with hands. what increase impresses of parody of man. In one feethand he holds chalice with purple wine. in second he had long flute-spear. He have hairless skull and narrow face, on with was painted joy. His eyes was hidden behind black spectacles. - If you called me and... these creatures only because you want watch my anger, i swore for infinite light that you will feel my wrath! [/i] - said Kiantira de Limney prophet of Light and Doom of very evil.. She was small women with dark hairs and blue eyes. For first look she has pretty face like inocent novice serving benevolent god. but in hers wrathful gaze and bended in cruel smile mouth you can see shadow of most terrible evil that is able for humans. Silk white robe hide monstrously scared body, about it known few mortals. - Do not flatter oneself lady. No one would take trouble to risk your terrible wrath! - Said another guest. He look like twenty years old man, with thin triangular face, but his firered eyes seems to be old, as if belong to creature who saw absolutely everything. Although seems to be sad, they glow madness... and wrath. He have shaggy red hairs, which fall on his back. He was dressed in red smile joyless and on covered by scales clawed hand dance flame.

I write fan fiction story... And want to found someone who help me to improwe it

Dziwne dziwności. Dwa tygodnie italkuje... I pada tooo... z góry. Zimno. Winter i coming?