Summer time

European countries have a summer time. In March they move the time forward and in October they return it back.
People think that summer time saves more energy. But the Parliament says that savings are small. Commission of Parliament decided to cancel summer time.

In the US, we call this "daylight savings time." Your writing is pretty good. Pay attention to articles, though. They are difficult. For instance, with "But the Parliament says that savings are small" it would be better without the "the" before Parliament while adding "the" before "savings."

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hey, I'm Scarlett, 28 years old, working and living in Shanghai now.
I can speak Fluent Chinese, but wanna learn English!! You know it so cool!! You can have many many different country friends,change own idea each other.So~~I like English!

 

Hey, I'm Scarlett, 28 years old, working and living (1) in Shanghai now.
I can speak (2) Fluent Chinese, but (3) wanna learn English!(4)! You know it so cool!! You can have many (5) many different country friends,change own idea each other.So~~I like English!

Hey, I'm Scarlett. I am 28 years old, now living and working in Shanghai. I can speak fluent Chinese, but want to learn English. You know, it's so cool! If you can speak English, you can have friends from many different countries and exchange ideas with them. So, I like English!

1. put more general idea first, more specific later
2. no caps on “fluent”
3. “wanna” is okay for speaking. Careful about such informal language in writing
4. One exclamation point is enough! Use them sparingly
5. non-idiomatic

 

加油！

The Tai Chi Chuan skills

There are four most important skills of Tai Chi Chuan. It combines Wrestling Punching Catching and Kicking.

Every good Tai Chi Chuan form must combines that four skill. If not there must be not a good Tai Chi Chuan form.

So if you saw the Tai Chi Chuan fighting. they must be likes it mix boxing Jujitsu and Muay Thai. If not there must be not a good Tai Chi Chuan.

 

For your reference, consider this version:

 

Tai Chi Chuan practice requires a combination of four important skills: wrestling, punching, catching, and kicking. Every good Tai Chi Chuan form must combine these four skills. If not, it is not good form. Good Tai Chi Chuan fighting will thus appear as a mix of boxing, Jujitsu and Muay Thai. If not, it is not good Tai Chi Chuan fighting style.