Please correct my essay:) How about in your country? Please give any tips!

I agree that the number of foreign workers in Japan will increase in the future. I have two reasons to support my opinion.

First of all, Japan has faced is facing an Aging aging society. Poplation The population of Japanese workers has been decreasing decreased for last few years. Companies in Japan have bothered worried/been concerned about the lack of workers.

Secondly, the issue which I mentioned in the first reason the current worker shortage is more severe in aging senior/elder care field. It is one of the most unpopular (alternatively "least popular) jobs in Japan. I work for at an institution for aged people. Whereas Although we are always looking for someone to work together, it is difficult to find workers. Moreover, they quit from us very easily (more naturally, "there is a high turnover of workers").

Therefore, we need workers who compensate for the shortage.

It is for these reasons that the number of foreigh foreign workers in Japan will increase in the future.

Good job Etsuko.  Most of the corrections are simply to make things more natural sounding.  

The audio is not terribly clear, but the best I can tell he says "<player's name> throwing his body into it, and it's gonna fall for Ibrahimovic. Ahh, c'mon! C'mon!" Hope that helps a little.

Typically, "fall out" is used in the phrase "to have a falling out." Here is an example: Joan and Tammy had a falling out two years ago and have not spoken to each other since. A "falling out" implies much more than a simple argument. It means that two people have had such disagreement that they now have nothing to do with one another. "Estrangement" would be a synonym to a "falling out." To describe a more simple disagreement, you can use the verbs "to argue" and "to fight." Hope this helps.

My Job

I working at a car lot. I have worked there for 8 months. It is a good job, but it is sometimes difficult because I am learning english English.

Good job Mostafa :-)

From the context you provided, this is referring to a maneuver performed on the ship's sails to bring them into a certain position relative to the current wind direction. More generally, the term "squared away" can mean to organize or put into order. Ex. (Before leaving, he took some time to tidy the apartment to make sure everything was squared away.)

New hobby☆

Last Friday, I played golf for the first time with my elementary school friends.
They were played very well. So They taught me how to do hit the bowls ball.
I had muscle pain was sore, but it's  was very fun.
I got am really into playing golf, so sometimes I want to practice and get better at Golf.!!

Good job Kotomi! 

soccer

I love playing soccer with my friends in the square.

Alternatively

I love to play soccer with my friends in the square.

Frank, Although very similar, the two sentences do have different meanings. "To get through a test" implies that someone has successfully passed an exam. "To get through with a test" implies that someone merely completes a test but the results are unknown. Additionally, you are correct that if the above sentences are changed from "get" to "got" as the tense change indicates the test was already taken in the past versus the future.