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Heeeeey!My name is Kevin.I come from China!My native language is Chinese.And I want to learn English.I'm looking for a language exchange patner.I' m now a student in high school.I want to improve my speaking.I can help you with your Chinese pronouciation,for I once been a master of our school's ceremony.I also can teach you some fashionable words used in China now.
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    一个新的政策

    我们的英国政府刚刚引入一个新的政策。这个新的政策就是让（可以改为允许）同性夫妇结婚。我对我政府的决定很满意。原来政策的意义就是说同性夫妇没有和别人同样的地位。那时侯他们的权利没有和别人完全公平平等。可是现在，不管人们的性别，每个人都可以结婚和他自己选择的人结婚。

    1，引入这个词用得不太恰当，一般我们说推行一个政策、施行一个政策或者是通过一个政策；

    2，意义这个词也用得不太准确，意义一般是形容事物所包含的思想和道理或者是作用，这里应当用意思这个词；

    3，我对我政府的决定很满意这句话可以改为我对政府的决定很满意。中间的“我”字显得有些多余，去掉了中间的“我”字可以使这句话表达得更简洁同时也不会是读者感到有歧义。就像英文里面I’m very pleased with my government's new policy和I'm very pleased with the government's new policy表达的意思是一样的但后者在中文里面显得更简洁。

    4，这篇文章能感觉到较大的英语气息，但这种现象会在练习多以后逐渐消失，因为我刚刚开始学英语的时候写出的作文也是中式英语。这篇作文已经写得很不错了！继续努力！

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    February 6, 2013
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    Introduction Heeey!I come from Chongqing China!And I'm in the last term of my high school.I want to major in English and Spanish in the university.I have great passion on learning languages since I was young.And I also like reading novels,giving speeches,drawing and listening to music(especially country music).Though I'm a little fat,I love sports.I joined a table tenis club,a badminton club and a roller skating club.I have a positive and peace attitude towards life.I love helping others.I will be very happy to help you with whatever within my stength.So if you want to learn Chinese or Chinese culture,I'll be your best choice!By the way,I want to learn English and Spanish.I hope we can help each other!THANKS!
    February 6, 2013
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    Hi!
    My eEnglish is not good. But I'm learning improving it now!
    I'm a journalist and singer in Brazil.

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    February 6, 2013
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself Heeey!I am learning English,for I want to study abroad.I also want to make friends with people from different countries!My native language is Chinese,and I grew up in China.I enjoy reading novels an listening to country music!I like playing badminton and table tennis.
    February 5, 2013
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