First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello I'm Brian. I need to improve my english skills so I need to speak english a lot. My native language is spanish so I can help you anytime.
I like music, art, learning about various cultures, poetry, and philosophy among other things. I'm studying psychology at the moment.
Hello, I'm Brian.
I need to improve my English skills, so I must speak English a lot. (If you say need twice, it sounds awkward)
My native language is Spanish, so if you need help with learning Spanish, I can help you anytime. (Here you need to repeat "Spanish" to clearify what it is you can help someone with.
I like music, art, learning about various/different cultures, poetry, and philosophy, among other things. I am studying phychology at the moment.
(If you say "I like cultures" it doesn't really make sense. You have to specify something about what you like.)
Very good Job Brian! Your English is excellent. You write better than many native English speakers.... Keep up the good work.
