29,04 2013

I often skip my classes. 나는 수업을 종종 빼먹습니다.
Don`t skip your meal. 식사를 거르지 마.
Eat three meals regularly. 세 끼 식사를 규칙적으로 하세요.
Regular exercise could help you. 규칙적인 운동은 너에게 도움이 될 꺼야.

(^ To me it sounds funny using could here without saying what excercise could help with. You can write "Regular excercise will help you" or "Regular excercise could help you feel happier" or something similar)

His confidence has to needs to be restored. 신뢰는 회복되야합니다.
(Can I use 'Confidence has to recover.'? Are both same meaning??) (Restored is better then recovered. This sentence doesn't sound complete until you state who's confidence needs restored.)

How do I adjust the room temperature? 방온도를 어떻게 조절 합니까?
The temperature has dropped. 기온이 뚝 떨어졌어.
He screamed in agony. 그는 고통에 비명을 질렀다.

I hope this was helpful!! ^_^

What does this mean?

'One thing's got nothin' to do with the other'

It's important to know that "got nothin" is slang or incorrect English. Although you may hear someone say this, it sounds more intellegent for someone to say:

'One thing "has nothing" to do with the other.'

My diary(1)

Sometimes I wake up in the morning with feeling fatigued even though I sleep slept sufficiently. It fell on today Today it hit me worse than usual. I forced myself to get up and then I went walked to the restroom. Looking at myself in the mirror, I looked like a wreck. My eyes were caked with sleep and my thick white saliva got was stuck around my mouth. (< I don't know if this is what you wanted, but it's almost like a creepy visual) Barely keeping my half-closed eyes open, I turned the tap on and water came rushing out. The moment my hand touched it, (< Touched what? The sink handle?) I felt cold thoughtout throughout my body. I quickly took my hand off and moved the sink handle (< If you've already said what kind of handle -sink handle- earlier, then all you would need to write is "handle".) to the left. My hand touched the running water twice and tested the heat of the water. I rinsed my hands in warm water, applied soap and made a lather. I started to wash Then I began washing my face. (< "I started to wash" works here but "Then I began washing" is better.)

I would like to learn how to use better English expressions in English, so I hope you can help correct errors in my writing.

You write expressions very well in English! I saw a visual image in my head as I was reading this. It made me want to read more!! ^_^ I hope my few corrections are helpful. 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am trying learn English because I like to speak other languages, and English will also help me in the work force.

Awesome!  Good luck! ^_^

How can I use this sentence with purpose?

"I'm waiting for him to come in order to have dinner together."  This is very formal. "In order" is what makes it formal. I wouldn't use this one. 

"I'm waiting for him to come so that we can have dinner together." This sentence is good! However, if you are talking about a friend who you want to have dinner with, you can say it like this:

"My friend and I are going to have dinner together. Now, I'm waiting for him to come so we can eat."

There are many more ways to write this sentence. 

I spent today chatting and drinking with my friends

Spending time with different friends I've got to sense has made me realize that there are friends who I feel comfortable with and those friends who I feel less comfortable with.
As I get older, I feel I get lazier. I tend to be more reluctant to use up energy to get closer to friends who I make me feel less comfortable.
I just let it be.

I hope this helps!! ^_^