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KATA, interested in comic and drawing comic looking for someone who can practice spoken English with me and I can teach her/him Chinese(mandarin) as well O(∩_∩)O
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    开心果在沙漠:穆萨堡

    穆萨堡
    موسی قلعه
    Musa Qala

    穆萨堡区(Musa Qala),是阿富汗赫尔曼德省军事重地,位于穆萨堡河畔,人口约2000人,以普什图人为主。该地便已成为塔利班和驻阿富汗各国联军争夺的要地。

    我到达阿富汗了以后. 我被陆军送到穆萨堡了。乘直升机去那里需要三十分钟骑直升机。沙漠没有植物,沙漠没有动物(沙漠没有植物也没有动物)。只有一些泥制房子和很多鸦片种植地。 区中心有一个小城市,那城市的旁边有一个基地。一半是美国海军陆战队一半是阿富汗的警察和陆军。

    我经常去市场和当地人喝茶抽烟。在那里,我们会谈论政治,当地发生的事件,阿富汗目前的局势。塔利班经常会在市场上放置炸弹,,伤害阿富汗警察或美国人。令人遗憾的是,这些炸弹通常只会伤害当地平民。去年四月,三名自杀式炸弹袭击者袭击了基地门口。幸运的是我在执行任务。可悲的是,爆炸杀害了四个我的(我的四个)阿富汗警察朋友和一些无辜的老百姓。

    我希望你喜欢我的穆萨卡拉简单的描述。如果时间允许,我会多写点我的经验和研究。感谢所有对于我文章的更正(修改)。谢谢。

     

    (I’m not sure what do you mean by "我经常去到市场为了跟地人喝的茶和烟香烟". You mean that you always went to the market for drinking tea and smoking with natives, or that you always went to the market to buy some tea and cigarette from natives? )BTW,the yellow parts are some not necessary modification.祝你平安好运!

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    January 26, 2013
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    The health...I think.

    One can't enjoy his wealth if you had to lie on the bed and maintain his life with a pile of medicine.And he even can't give promise and sence of security to who he love.

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    January 26, 2013
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    “虎”的简体和繁体应该是一样的~
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    January 26, 2013
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am learning English now, actually, I have learnt English for more than 10 years. At the beginning, I just learnt it for my examinations, all exams of vital importance involve English. So in some extant I even can be regarded as an "experienced learner".Unfortunately, I found I was wrong, I just treat it as a SUBJECT, not a language. Our teacher taught us how to analyze the grammar structure, found some sentence with two predicates and correct them, write some very simple argumentation, or finish all reading test without knowing what the reading exactly mean. It's a kind of know-how. We were equipped all those knowledge and were sent to examination room. We finished papers with great relief, then threw them away. As a result, I didn't found that my English is poor until I went to university.My university's language of instruction is English. I used to spend even 1 hour writing a 100-word so-called argumentation in high school,but now I'm facing 500-word or 800-word or 5-page or something more horrible,which really drive me crazy. To make matter worse, I have some difficulties in communication with foreigners. I totally can't get their point because they always speak fast, and when I try to express myself, the only thing i can do is that desperately look through all my vocabulary to piece up a sentence---usually with grammar mistakes. The above is my English learning story.And I'm KATA from China, my native language is mandarin(Putonghua). In daily life I'm a quiet girl and always seems introvert,not good at chat with other people.But my friends know I'll become outgoing with familiar. I'm keen on comic, especially Japanese comic (also called Manga?) and I'm kind of expert on drawing them. I enjoy drawing the character of some comic books, which is named fan art.
    January 26, 2013
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