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    百思买的新策略

    This is my first attempt at typing something related to news and business in Chinese. Any comments/ edits would be appreciated. Thanks!

    上周我和老师讨论了美国电子消费零售巨头百思买的新企业策略。

                                                  应该是“百思买新的企业策略”
    今年七月份，百思买宣布贵公司会跟中国网站公司天猫合作，

                               里面的”贵公司“可以不要

    在网上卖百思买的箭鱼自有品牌。

                             “自有的品牌”

    百思买2011年在上海关掉最后一家零售店，而宣布他们要完全退出中国市场。

                                                      “而后”

    这次，通过和天猫合作，百思买应该可以解决他们的一些的水土不服的问题。

                                                                “一些的”可以去掉不用    

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    January 28, 2013
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself My name is Eric from Beijing.
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