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为什么这么难? why is it so hard ?
有这么多人想要学习外语,为什么找个学习伙伴还会这么难?我想和素质高一点的人聊天,我想在提高英语水平的同时,帮助别人学习汉语,但是找到一个能够长期互相帮助的学习伙伴似乎很难,为什么,为什么,为什么呢?
so There are many people who want to learn a foreign language, so why is it so hard to find a learning partner? I want to talk with good guys. I want to improve my English, and also help others learn Chinese at the same time. but It seems very hard to find a long and, stable learning partner. why why why ?I noticed you space a period from your sentences which is not correct. This is just a last tip :)
It seems fairly easy to find language partners in my opinion. I suppose you could be more assertive. Well good luck!
0 votedJanuary 17, 20130I don't want to push myself but...
I have read emails from Year of English from this month. I don't want to push myself by learning too much about touching English, but I also don't want to leave this new world. Of course I'm not an employee of Year of English. but I just recommend the link below, however.
Here's one video of a talk conversation about "the world's English mania":
http://www.ted.com/talks/jay_walker_on_the_world_s_english_mania.html
I'm going to become FLUENT in English in 2013 (better idea to identify a time frame, example: "by the end of 2013)! Join me! http://yearofenglish.com #YearOfEnglishFor the first correction, I wasn't to sure what you wanted to say so I tried to find a similar replacement.
Anyways I wish they had a website for japanese :(
0 votedJanuary 17, 20131Fried rice again.
I learned on here that immediately brushing up my English is good. is good for my English (I don't quite understand what structure you were aiming for) . That's why I cooked fried rice for breakfast this early this morning again. This time I didn't forget that the rice should be added last. I used a can of tuna, Negi ( like onion head), and egg. Since there is oil inside the tuna can, I didn't have to put olive oil on the pan today. Now I know how to make fried rice and can arrange it in many ways from now on.
I made an appointment about an interview examination with a certain trading company in Tokyo the week after Tuesday( I want to say 2 weeks later Tuesday)wording is kind of strange. I was rejected by only 2 companies only today, but they always cheer me up with emails like below: "Best wishes for your continued success.". So I have to be keep going to be succeed although I'm just success that I put on my weight these days (Not sure what you're trying to convey here). I'm over-eating but it's ok, now is the time of hibernation for sleep. (Hibernation is a time where animals sleep through the winter. You can say it jokingly, but if its serious then that would be incorrect)For the sentence "....but they always cheer me up with emails like below:"
-the following message wasn't below the sentence so that would confuse the readers. You could have also said "but they always cheer me up with emails such as, "Best wishes......"
This was super impressive english nonetheless. Hopefully you get what you want.0 votedJanuary 10, 20132Christmas dinner
I am planning to cook Roast beef on Christmas day. This is my first time cooking a roast beef. I am preparing for my guests, so I really don't want to fail.
I have found some good recipes. One is cooking in an oven and the other is cooking in a pressure cooker. It seems like using a pressure cooker is much easier and much faster. I never knew that I can cook Roast beef using a pressure cooker.
Wish me luck.Seems to be no mistakes with grammar. The "R" in roast beef is not capitalized unless it is a special name.
Hopefully everything went well haha
0 votedJanuary 10, 20130First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I want to improve my English, and I also want to make friends from any English speaking country.
hmmm. I don't see any mistakes. You could take out the second "I want to " because you've already specified that "I" is the subject.
I want to improve my English, and I also want to make friends from any English speaking country.
0 votedJanuary 10, 20130Second day!
I need to improve my english, but I don´t know how! In may I will go to study in Australia and need to learn fast
I am going to study in Australia and need to learn it(or english) fast.
The most effective way is to actually talk to someone in english. You need to study grammar and say phrases, but for it to really be effective you need to converse.
For example I can understand korean but can't speak it well. When I am talking with someone suddenly my mind forces me to say phrases i've picked up from my parents because it recognizes a pattern. Funny because I've talked informally all the time to the elderly and offend them haha.
0 votedJanuary 10, 20131The freedom to express their own ideas?
The essay for a practice of the IELTS! I will take IELTS in 3 days! Wish me luck and give me some advice please (´・ω・` ) : )
Throughout the history, it is a controversy issue that creative artists should always have rights to express their own arts with the will. Whilst some people state that they should be restricted by the goverment.
It is true that those (not necessary) free ideas, arts, and mass media can affect a lot in our lives. They give us a large number of information and expressions. In the meantime, it can harm and mislead others.
If the government does not restrict a harmful or incorrect information, there would be countless lies and dangers.
For example, in Japan, an article has been paid (could be given a better word) a great amount of attention.
The author stated that milk is not healthy, even worse, it can cause many kinds of diseases. However, it has no proofs and he (could be replaced with a better word) just wanted to write an unbelievable article.
Since milk is believed that it is to be healthy, people got were shocked and the consumption of milk declined for a while. Because of that, a lot (said this before. diversify adjectives like :"a large majority")of farmers got were affected terribly.
In spite of those facts, I believe that everyone should deserve the freedom . The government can not force us to be how they wish to be. correct but this phrase sounds a bit awkward
To sum up, it would be for the best if people express their thoughts responsibly.
They should not state issues without proving the legitimacy of it.
Otherwise (sounds informal), we could lose our rights and the goverment will have (this is passive, should be avoided) to restrict the freedom.The question seems a bit weird. Is it asking if the government should regulate freedom of speech/press or creativity of an artist?
This is fantastic for a learning language. minor spelling errors and word usage but overall great!
0 votedJanuary 8, 20131
