| Last month | Last 3 months | All time | |
|---|---|---|---|
| Completed lessons | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Attendance rate | 100% | 100% | 100% |
"move on from the set", means to move to the next set/stage/scene. They are moving to a different background. An example would be Titanic. One set would be on the bridge of the boat, the next scene would be in the cabin, another on the bough of the boat, etc.
"keep it young and juvenile" means don't make the kids adults. Kids are fresh, new and naive. They want to keep that energy in the scene.
0 votedNovember 9, 20170help to my grammar,I am not sure these sentences I made
The occasion which happened during that period of time <strike>was</strike> showed vividly in this painting
they're totally different from each other in personality even <font color="#ff00ff">though</font> they are twins
<strike>the ability of</strike> her husband's leadership <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">ability</font> is what <strike>her</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">she </font>admired
spring returns <strike>to the earth</strike> and everything is reawakened0 votedNovember 9, 20170A new seller of advertisement
After my first <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">semester</font> studying in Melbourne, I was introduced by my gf to a media company. The boss is a nice man, he used to be a professor in China but came to Melbourne at the age of 31. Within the next 20 years he founded a successed company and settled in Australia. <strike>As</strike> <strike>to be a</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">I am </font><font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">the </font>new assisant of marketing <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">and </font>he shows endless <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">patience</font> to me <strike>but</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">and does </font>not force me <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">try and grow </font><strike>to gain</strike> profit<font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">s</font>. <strike>Just as what i</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">As I </font>said before, I'm just an infant <strike>of</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">in </font>this job. Actually, it's my first job during <strike>the</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">my </font>whole 26 years <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;"><font color="#9c00ff"><em>(or you could say "it's my first job</em></font><font color="#9c00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">")</font></font>. I made many mistakes and some <strike>leads</strike> <strike>to</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">led </font>our <strike>consumer</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">customer to </font>stop advertising in our newspaper. Working at my oppsite is our <strike>calculator</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">accountant </font>who is <strike>a</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">strict</font> <strike>boy</strike> but likes <strike><font color="#9c00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">boxing</font> </strike><font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">chatting</font>. <font color="#9c00ff" style="background-color: inherit;"><em>(I'm not sure what you mean by boxing.)</em></font> <strike>It</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">He </font>seems to talk too much <strike>on</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">to </font>others. <strike>Then</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">So I</font> will continue <strike>my experience of</strike> <font color="#ff00ff">selling advertisements</font>.While i reached my customers, I <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">don't</font> know what role should<font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;"> I take</font> <strike>act</strike>. When I acted as an advertiser, they <strike>dont</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">didn't </font>need me. When I <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">acted</font> as a friend, they just chat <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">with </font>me about their children. I will <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">describe</font> how to deal with this <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">statement</font><font color="#9c00ff" style="background-color: inherit;"><em> (do you mean "sentiment" instead of statement?)</em></font> in the next paper.
0 votedNovember 9, 20171Beneficial Information and facts for locating the correct legal representative
Discovering <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">yourself</font> in a situation, exactly where you will certainly be required to arrive in court, can be <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">nerve </font>wracking. Nevertheless, you <strike>is able to</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">can </font>reduce your stress levels. You <strike>may</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">can </font>relax when you are self-confident. You might <strike>have found</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">find </font>the ideal attorney to suit your needs. The tips and tricks in this post might be a big <strike>support</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">help to you.</font>0 votedNovember 9, 20170Diary 20171108
I woke up at 6:50 in the morning and started to <strike>make up</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">get ready for work</font>. I had roasted chicken thigh as my breakfast, which I had <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">bought</font> from Carrefour the night before. I walked out my house at 7:25 to take MRT. It had <strike>cost</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">taken </font>me an hour to get to the office. On my way to work, it was drizzling which made me <strike>to</strike> walk faster.
Surprisingly, I found out that I was the first one to arrive at the office. I couldn't <strike>take out</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">remove </font>the key from the door after I had opened it. So I tired hard to pull the key out from the door knob many times. It finally worked after I rotated the door knob with the key about 6 times. After the incident, I put my stuff on the desk, <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">grabbed</font> my thermos bottle, and heading to pantry room to make some hot tea. On my way to the pantry room, I met my <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">colleague, </font> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">so</font> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">the</font> two of us had a small chat on the subject of military. After the chat, we both <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">went</font> back to the office and started to work. At noon, we called for <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">a</font> food delivery because <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">we could split it </font><strike>of spit</strike><font color="#9c00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">.(Not sure of what you mean by "of spit")</font>
After<font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;"> my</font> lunch break, I started to focus on my work, which was arranging <strike>the document of</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">an </font>authorization letter for an author who <font color="#ff00ff">had </font><font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">agreed</font> to cooperate with our company. I had finished my work before 5:30 and clocked off at 5:40. <font color="#9c00ff" style="background-color: inherit;"><em>(Not sure of how they say this in England, but we say "clock out" in the US.)</em></font>
On my way to MRT station, it was still sprinkling. I found out it was charming to watch <font color="#ff00ff">the</font> rain drops which looked like <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">it was </font>snowing. I took the MRT and then went to Zara <strike>for</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">to </font>window shop<strike>ping</strike> since I had to wait for my friend, who was on his way <strike>to here</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">there</font>. He met up with me after half an hour at the front door of Zara. Then we walked together to the restaurant. The restaurant offered a special price on fruit beer during dinner time. We ordered fruit beer and <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">the </font>hamburgers that <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">the </font>waitress had recommended to us. It was a joyful night for us. We laughed, chatted, and watched TV for <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">a </font>couple of hours. <strike>And</strike> We stepped into Forever 21 for the very first time. <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">T</font>his was absolutely a heaven for me and I made up my mind that I <strike>will</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">would </font>buy some products on my next payday. After our window shopping, we called it a night and separated.*****
<font color="#9c00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">Good job. Some of the changes were spelling changes and some of the changes I made were to simplify what you were saying. </font>
0 votedNovember 9, 20171Group Presentation in a class. November, 8, 2017
Yesterday, our group did very well in class for <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">our</font> group presentation <strike>as an</strike> <strike>assignment</strike>. In our group, we separated the <font color="#ff00ff"><font style="background-color: inherit;">part<font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">s</font></font></font> of <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">work such as;</font> researching data, writing paragraphs, developing the presentation with a designed file, and the planning. We planned <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">which</font> days to check each <strike>one's</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">other's </font>progress during <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">the</font> three weeks. <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">We</font> <strike>got while we</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">hoped</font> <strike>it</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">we would make </font><strike>made</strike> it in time, however, the plan <strike>was</strike> <font color="#000000" style="background-color: inherit;">failed</font>.One member of our group didn't finish the part <strike>her</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">she </font>took, <strike>besides</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">also</font>, she copied <strike>the</strike> whole paragraphs from someone else's <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">paper </font>without proper citation. When I checked her <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">work</font>, I was really shocked and speechless. <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">For m</font>ore than <strike>3</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">three </font>days <font color="#ff00ff">I'd <font color="#ff0000">("I had")</font></font> spent on the presentation file, while she just copied and pasted <strike>it</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">hers</font>. I was very upset with her, <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">although </font>I didn't express it. The day <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">of the presentation</font> we presented our research successfully. <strike>while</strike> I took her part <strike>to</strike> <font color="#ff00ff">of the </font><font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">presentation</font> <strike>when</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">because </font>she <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">was </font>absent <strike>for</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">due to </font><strike>her</strike> illness <font color="#ff0000">(or you can say "because of illness"),</font> we got <font color="#ff0000">(you can also say "we received")</font> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">an </font>applause from the <font color="#ff00ff"><font style="background-color: inherit;">class</font></font> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">including the</font> <strike>a</strike> lecturer. It was really great <strike>for my</strike> feeling even <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">though </font>we <strike>couldn't</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">didn't </font>prepare enough. The next day, she came back to class and didn't ask me about <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">the </font>presentation. I didn't feel very well, <strike>but</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">so </font>I just let it slide. If I have to have a group member <strike>once</strike> again, I need to make a strict rule to keep it.
0 votedNovember 9, 20171The street sexual harassment - Part 2
Inspired by a video that I watched on Facabook a long time ago, I gave them a taste of their own medicine (this is the link of the video if you want to watch it https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vMAf6NZ5o60&list=LLCWNpnxbipjYOyZpLsyyHng&index=2 ). So, what I did was this: when this guy told me a phrase that really made me anger and crossed the line, I pretended to give him a kiss with my hand and smile<font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">d</font>, but after that, I immediately showed my middle finger to him and changed my smile <strike>by</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">back to </font>a serious face again. I wish I could have recorded that moment! That guy was so ashamed! And I could see his annoyance in his face. I could do that since they were in an ambulance and I knew they couldn’t do anything worse <strike>against</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">to </font>me.
I know that there is an article in the Penal Code of El Salvador which <strike>tells us</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">says </font>that anyone <font color="#ff00ff"><font style="background-color: inherit;">who<font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">se</font></font></font> <strike>has a</strike> behavior in public <strike>that </strike>involves unwanted phrases, touching, signs or any other unwanted sexual conduct will be <strike>sanctioned</strike> <font color="#ff00ff">sentenced (you cold also use the words "punished" or "penalized") </font>with prison of three or five years. Nevertheless, that is not enough since is it <font color="#ff00ff">not</font> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">necessarily</font> the <font style="background-color: inherit;">existence of more <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">severe</font> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">punishments</font> against</font> the street sexual harassment, <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">it is in place </font>mainly to protect the <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">woman's</font> integrity.
In many cases, the aggressors are not aware that they are exercising a type of violence <font style="background-color: inherit;"><font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">and</font> </font>they are not interested to know it either. We can note that women are <strike>being</strike> constantly harassed no matter the place, the conditions, and much less the clothes we wear.
The street sexual harassment is a phenomenon that is getting more <font color="#ff00ff"><font style="background-color: inherit;">power<font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">ful</font></font></font> and becoming more intense <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">and </font>for that reason we have to be <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">the agents of</font> change. Likewise, the Government <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">has</font> to work <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">harder</font> and <strike>qualify</strike> <font color="#ff00ff">state </font>that <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">street sexual harassment is </font>problem <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">and is truly</font> a kind of violence.0 votedNovember 9, 20172diary 4
The Student Organization held <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">an</font> Orientation camp for freshmen last week. I <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">was </font>so embarrassed on the first day because my team members were shy and <strike>short-</strike><font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">spoke</font> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">very little</font>. But, our team leader was very kind, humorous and <strike>en</strike>livened the atmosphere. <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">After </font><strike>In</strike> the three days, we still <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">are </font>not familiar with each others, but maybe <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">there is </font>something different <strike>with</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">in </font>our relationship. I hope that we will be <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">close</font> to each other. <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">It</font> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">was</font> a special experience <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">for </font><strike>to</strike> me. I'm tired but <strike>substantial</strike> <font color="#ff00ff" style="background-color: inherit;">fulfilled</font>.**Good job. Just make sure to make sure if you are writing about a past experience to use the past tense through out.
0 votedNovember 9, 20171
