22/10 

Is my birthday , i would like to share this day with italki as it is the place where i learned , improved my language and met an amazing people .( you wrote you met an amazing people, people refers to more persons, so here you have to write met some amazing people or if you met only one amazing person then you have to write met an amazing person)

I hope you to share this special day with me by writing happy birthday in your language ♤

My first english text :D

Hello, this is my first english text.
I’m learning English Individually, cause I don’t have any classes, but I have some colleagues to help me, which is very very good. But, still i have lot of problems with words and pronunciation. so try to listen to musics and I try to repeat it. When I have time, I read English books and i make notes of the unknown words and  i search them after.
At the moment, i'm a student so i can't keep focus at all. (I don't know what you meant to say)"Then, i'm study a bit of english" i think it might be, Now i will study a bit of english and i'm waiting for my vacations to devote myself to study english.

Thanks for reading it and good luck with your studies and life ;D

My plans)

My dream is to speak English and ltalian language very well and begin to learn French or(and start to learn French) or (and to start learning french). When i'm 50 years old, l will be a good and an athletic woman who can speak 5-6 languages.

Note :  You can't use which we you are speaking about a person or yourself. you have to use who, how accordilngly. Example : Who can speak multiple languages? How can i speak multiple languages? Which is used where you are speaking about things or objects, Example : Which is your car?

you can say "Why is the price of rice raising?" it is gramatically correct, because the question you ment to ask was in Present continious tense.  

Help me

Can somebody help me to put the words into the correct order to make sentences.
1. thing/ the/ writing /The/ love/ his/ l/ about / is/ humour
2. I / What/their/ main/ was/ characters/ liked/ the/ about/ relationship

1) The humour about the thing is? I love his writing.

    The thing i love about his writing is the humour.

     I love his writing , the thing is about the humour.

    The humour is his writing, I love about the thing.

    I love about his writing, the thing is the humour.

    The humour is the thing, i love about his writing.

     I love about the writing, the thing is his humour.

     His writing is about the humour, I love the thing.

2)  What i liked about their main characters was the relationship.

My job.

Hello! I am a teacher at a school and I like my profession (why i replace it with profession here because the word "it" is not that respectable word but here Teacher is a very respectable profession), but almost all my friends think that this is one of the worst job in the World, why?! this is difficult, but I like this. What people think about this job in your country?( use the word this here so it seems more professional way of speaking and also refers a particular thing)