Dear all my lovely friends,
Now, here is like a battle field between difficult stubborn books and Korean University students<em> [in Korea] actually you don’t have to put the Korea here as it is understandable that the students are Koreans, it will just make it redundant .</em> It is very tough seriously. From last week to 2 weeks later,because there will be final examinations in most Korean Universities.
<em>Perhaps it’s more concise this way [It is very tough for these last 2 weeks because it is going to be the final examination in most Korean Universities]</em>
Some of my friends [have studied ] <em>Present perfect tense</em> all night in library and some people are [getting] <em>becoming </em>zombies, including me. As you know, many students commonly look for energy-drinks like Red bulls. [It is not a commercial comment] There is a better way of saying it (this does not imply endorsement) to get a power to study in exam time. We are [addicted] to <em>[those do not use ‘that’ since you are using plural form, which in this case are the’ drinks’]</em> kind of drinks and Academic words.
I always want to get a super-good grade in every <em>[class A noun and the words that modify that noun must agree in number ‘every class]</em>.] I have taken. However, the problem is I don't want to study now. <em>So, (always put a comma when using transition words like this) </em>that is<em> [ironic] this should be adjective as you are referring to the situation </em> and this situation makes me totally exhausted. I know I have to do something to get better. If I don't study, I never can <em>[can never] </em>have a real smile after finishing the finals. It is true. So, I know the reason why I study. "<em>I cannot always do what</em> I like. I am not a child." [Right. I can do. I just say to myself. "See you my every stuff which makes me enjoy in my head." ] <em>You lost me here</em><em></em><em>
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I've got to go back to study. Hoping to see you guys if I survive during the final period. [ Hope to see you guys if I survive during the final period]
Stay warm, everyone.
I hope this helps and good luck with your finals! :)