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    December 13, 2012
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    Let me show you some ideals and correct some mistakes

    Your full-post:

    Hom nay toi se noi ve "minh lam gi moi ngay". Dau tien, toi thuc day vao buoi sang. Sau do toi nau an sang. Binh thuong toi an trung voi banh va trai cay. Toi nghi an sang nen thi don gian. Sau do, toi di tap the duc, mat 60 phuc (it should be "phut"). Luc nao ranh toi thich di choi voi ban o thanh pho. Tu day den thanh (you forgot this one) pho mat 30 phuc (phut). Hom nay toi dinh se tham nha ban tru phi toi met moi.

    "minh lam gi moi ngay" : You should replace this with "những điều mà mình sẽ làm mỗi ngày" meaning "Things I will do everyday"

     

    Toi nghi an sang nen thi don gian : you should replace with "Tôi nghĩ bữa ăn sáng nên đơn giản"


    Hom nay toi dinh se tham nha ban tru phi toi met moi : I think you should replace the green one with "cảm thấy mệt" which means "feel tired" 

    Well, your writing is so good :D. I barely don't need to fix your grammar. All i need to do is just make it more natural! xD 

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    December 13, 2012
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    First introduction of myself! Hello, i'm a Vietnamese student, my years old is 16 and I am learning English - which is a frequently language on the world - because I want to make friends with everyone from others country, in addition to improve my knowledge. My native languages is Vietnamese and of course I grew up in Vietnam. I enjoy reading books, playing games, etc....
    December 11, 2012
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