Hi linkinomo,

here's the correction, hopefully I haven't missed anything.

 

Some Things in Common between Chaos in Brazil and Thailand


According to a CNN report called “Brazilian Protesters to Take a Break as More Security Hits the Streets” On CNN ,which is a regular source of news I read almost every day, Brazilians took to the streets to protesting for against improper allocation of money under the control of by their government.

The author said argues that the cause of the problem is the a financial plan that where the government is going to pour money/finance new in building stadiums and infrastructures to support the football World Cup, to be held next year which will hold in the year and the upcoming Olympic Games in 2016. People became angry since many parts of organizations, including hospitals and educational infrastructures, are lacking funding across the country lack of subsidies, which used to spend all over the country. In addition, life in Brazil is becoming harsh too. The higher cost of living squeezes the workforce to earn more money. Students experience/suffer are suffering with lower education standards, whereas as well as patients who have to pay more money on for their health care.

This news reminds me the incident in Thailand 2 years ago to the last-2-year incident in Thailand. There were a lot of/many angry people occupying the roads, a lot of violence and a large burning a big shopping center was set on fire and a lot of violence. I think the problems were the same as those problem in Brazil, namely which are financial and political problems. and it is Nevertheless, I think it is another a good way to develop their county. Thai governments is notorious in terms of for corruption and bribery, which have been happening for a long time and are hard to change. However, one day, the breaking point was reached occurred. People uprose against the old traditional regimes. Although we lost people, as well as and a lot of time and money to recovery the city, it has the protests urged other Thai people to show their power and the old government system has improved changed in a better way. I think to demonstrate voicing people's opinion by protesting/through protests is a good and right way to develop countries.

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