The first thing I want to say is that my English is quite bad so if I have some mistakes in my writing, please check and fix them. Thank you! There are so many idols out there, but this group is the most special and meaningful for me. They're BTS. Perhaps you already know them, BTS is a Korean boy group with 7 members which is managed by Big Hit Entertainment (also HYBE Corporation now). The leader of this group is RM. He's one of 3 rappers along with SUGA and j-hope. Those men are very talented; they take part in composing almost all BTS songs. Besides that, the group has 4 vocalists. They're Jin, V, Jimin, and Jungkook. They also know how to write music and have composed some songs. Each member of BTS has a good personality and some of them study very well. Especially RM, he learned English by himself through an English movie called 'Friends'. He usually reads books when he has free time and always tries to improve his skills every single day. That's why I' admire him. Moreover, their music is different from other bands. BTS songs are not only for teenagers but also for old people. If you want to play their songs at a party, you can play 'Fire', 'Not today', 'Mic Drop' or 'Dynamite'. But if you want to listen to a song with a soft melody, you can also try 'Spring Day', '2!3', 'Zero o'clock' or 'Jamais Vu'. The lyrics, the melody, all the things of those songs has helped me a lot. When I feel stressed or depressed, I often listen to BTS music. It's like an encouragement which help me be more confident and face difficulties bravely. Those are the reasons why I like BTS. What about your idols and why do you like them? Thanks for reading!

Hi,everyone . I want to say, " my struggle have gone or my strugle has gone" 🙏😇

I am so sorry to hear that. But I agree with you, it’s not easy to find a serious language partner here. They post everyday, but if you ask them for further information, most of them don’t reply and most of their replies are like this. Teachers also send you messages to advertise themselves.

I started a new habit around a few years ago that has changed my life a lot. That habit is reading books. In fact, reading books is an interesting experience that helps people in changing their ways of thinking and as a result, changing their lives. Personally, I started reading small books about biographies of great people and personal development. By spending a lot of time in reading, and as days passed by, I realised that my thoughts and ideas changed a lot. I acquired a huge amount of information about multiple and important subjects in life.

I've been to Europe and had an amazing opportunity to visit three beautiful countries: Spain, Portugal and France. The weather was very hot and, on holidays, the beaches were full of people taking sun bath and doing sports. I love the energy and gladness that only summer can bring to ordinary days. Phophets Beach was the beach that I liked the most. It is really wonderful with clear waters and white, thin sand. As a runner I couldn't waste the opportunity to cover some kilometers in such beautiful place like that but due the high temperatures, I was only able to run 5km daily while sweating like a worn off kettle 😅. I'm eternally grateful and I don't get tired to say much thanks to the Lord for everything you have given to me.

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I remember when I was in elementary school, our school organized a five day holiday in military school. I dearly wish that they had to endure the same experience that we had to. It was not all bad. After a day of torture and groaning, we went up stairs to our dorm room. I had to share it with three girls. We traded scary stories, we even ate a hot pot together. A dorm mate bought a hot pot that only needed water, the materials are all in the package. I was both surprised and thrilled of the prospect of eating in the dorm room right under the adult’s nose. The hot pot was delicious. While we were eating on the terrace, the girl from the nearby dorm poked her head between the bars (our dorm room terrace was separated from hers by only a few bars) and asked us what we were doing. We told way too much scary stories and was scared half to death. It was a trip filled with pain, happiness and scary stories.