Please help me correct these few lines, keep in mind this isn't an essay, it is as if I were talking to someone: I started my day at my work by reading the news and I learned that the new Peruvian government is looking to raise salary tax, the government tax applies for all salaries, for example if you earn $1000 a month, you would need to pay $10 to government. They say the money increase would serve to help poor people throughout the country but I have my doubts since I’ve worked for the government before I know much of this money will be used to only keep the useless red tape employee's. I’d be more willing to donate that money straight to someone in need than to the government.