First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I want to be more fluent about in English, because next year I will go to America for university studying to study at a university. Before I go to America, I want to deeply understand American culture.

 

Well done, hope this helps! Your English is good, keep practicing!

You could connect these sentences a number of ways. 1. I always give you advice, which you never listen to. Relative pronouns, like "which," often follow immediately after the noun they refer to. 2. I always give you advice but you never listen to it. This would be good if you want to emphasize the contrast in the two statements. "But" makes it clear that one counters the other. 3. I always give you advice and you never listen to it. This does not make a clear point of the contrast like 'but" does but is still a possibility. You would be more likely to hear this spoken than written since speaking is not as precise.

"Parents buy an expensive dog," this part is correct but usually when speaking about parents you want to specify whose parents. e.g. "My parents..." or "Their parents..." or "Her parents..." You don't Have to include this but it sounds funny when you don't. "regard it as their another daughter," Their and another cannot go together. 1. You could say, "regard it as their daughter" and just leave out another. This would be less specific because it doesn't say whether or not they have any other children. 2. You could say, "regard it as another daughter" and leave out their. Since you are already talking about parents you don't have to include "their" it can just be assumed by context. 3. You could say, "regard it as their other daughter." This would be the most specific because it implies that they already have one daughter and now are adding the dog with her. "and stay with it wherever they are." If you are talking about the dog staying with them you should say, "and it stays with them wherever they go." If you are focusing on the parents always keeping the dog with them you could say, "and they keep/bring it with them wherever they go." The reason you should use "go" at the end of the sentence and not "are" is because "staying with them wherever" implies the parents moving from place to place. And yes, you can use three verbs in one sentence. Hope this helps