Experience in a cover letter

I have experience developing product strategy and sales support activities; as a business manager in my actual position, as CEO in "ACME company", and as a technical representative in the international realm during my experience in SITA.

My broad knowledge in networking, cybersecurity and technology fields, and mastering in WiFi solutions, would be a strong addition to the team currently in place. I have often taken an active part in strategic planning, as well as discovering and implementing innovative IT solutions.

This is really great! Just remember that only proper names, rather than position titles like here, are capitalized in English. Good luck!

Skills in a cover letter

I am confident that my soft and hard skills, as well as my experience, make me a solid candidate for this opening. In addition to my technical experience, until only a year ago, as founder and leader in the company ACME; I acted as Engineer and Product Director bringing to the market "THE PRODUCT TNT", a cloud service that enables next generation managed multi-vendor Wi-Fi, and we succeedes positioning it as a competitive solution in Spain.

My only other comment is that the last sentence is very long by English standards. It has 6 different parts to it which is way too long. Consider breaking it up into two smaller sentences to make it more readable. Nice writing!

Harley: the tenderness of a blind dog that helps sick children

Harley cannot see the faces of children staying at the hospital. However there is no doubt that he perfectly understands these children's situation and tries to bring them peace, joy and love.
Harley lost his sight when he was five years old, due to glaucoma. Some months later he had been adapted to his new situation and moved around peacefully. Six years after that, he comes regularly to Shriners Hospital to visit children. The Medical team believes that animal visits (like Harley's) reduce the children's anxiety. The animal visit and the contact with him provokes a positive reaction in sick children and it's very grateful to see how happy children are having Harley with them.

Lidia, this is a beautiful story and very well written. I've made some suggestions to make it sound a little better. "There is no doubt" is a set phrase you can use to say what you meant. Another example might be "There is no doubt that you write well in English!" I changed 'transmit' to 'bring' because transmit seems stiff and formal, though it is not necessarily incorrect. Bring sounds nicer here and conjures up the thought of him bringing gifts. I changed consider to believe though considers still works, it just sounds a little strange. Believe, think, are convinced that - all those are options that could work. Keep writing and nice job!

Sit quietly on the moon: the insignificance of every day problems

If you could travel to the moon, take a beer out of your bag and sit quietly for a while just staring at the earth; what thoughts do you think would come to your mind?

Watching your country from a really far away distance, trying to find your house, guessing about all the minuscule interactions that might be happening right now in your town, but hey! What about all the other places? The other countries.

I'm sure those times I have felt my world is going down because of that personal problem I had would seem senseless from the moon, so... what are the big real questions that really include us all?

This is great writing! Creative and well written - I made a few changes just to make it flow better, hope this helps!

CV introduction

I have been working in IT for over 20 years, in all aspects of the field sector. Currently I am employed as a Business Development Manager at Einzelnet. I have an extensive management experience (15 years) with exposure to senior management positions, discussing strategy and presenting solutions.

This is great! Just those two little corrections to make. Keep writing and good luck with the CV!

The Outliers Book Puzzle Solution Part 2

That kept me thinking… What’s the method to convert T1 into T2? And then I’ve imagined the following two steps. Step One: what if… now all clovers become hearts (and hearts translate into diamonds obviously). Well after doing so, I ended up with a new matrix, sadly that, sadly, was still not the solution. So here comes the tricky part. I also noticed that if I applied a Second Step and “moved every cell in the resulting matrix one position to the left” I ended up with T2 configuration.


Step Two is a little bit difficult to understand as you can see in the image, “moving cells to the left” can be tricky, let’s define cell on top left as cell (1,1). After the movement operation completes: the cell that was in position (1,1) moves to (3,3); cell (2,1) to (1,3); (3,1) to (2,3) etc.

After that, I tried my theory going from T2 to T3 but “this time the hearts become diamonds (and diamonds translates into clovers), the second step of moving all the cells one place to the left is the same”. Lastly I applied this strange set of operations to the T8 and the resulting T9 is the same as “Solution A” (see the Puzzle Pic).

After posting this solution on Facebook, my friend told me that the problem was found in a book called “Outliers: The Story of Success”and as a brain teaser they did not reveal the steps to reach the solution in the book. That’s the reason why i’m sharing my two-step algorithm here.

I do love puzzles and after this enjoyable experience, I decided to buy the book in kindle format and started reading it.