※我來自台灣，所以修改起來會是繁體的，你可以也參考看看

我看了日本动漫

我看了日本动漫，用中文名字是叫『水果篮子』。(『是』或『叫』可以選一個)

我喜欢那這个动漫，(通常對正在敘述的的東西用『這』,this)

我也喜欢Tohru Honda （喜欢， 不爱， 不是一见钟情， 哈哈），不知道如果她是否有中文名？你看过了吗？你喜欢Tohru Honda吗？ 你喜欢水果篮子吗？谢谢。(主詞放在第一個問句比較正式)

※我也很喜歡日本動漫喔～～

Tohru Honda的中文名字，在台灣翻譯叫『本田透』

Thanks shyam.

It's a little different from my original meaning, I didn't express clear. So I correct my composition like that：


The other reason that I want to learn English is...

I met a man about five months ago, he is a teacher from oversea, at that time he was working for a manager at diffierent department in my office.

He came to our office and went to looking for the manager, but it was Saturday, a holiday and the manager was not here. I think maybe he had an appointment with this manager.

I told him with rough English, I said "The manager is not here, not come yet." (Manager是一個職位，前要加the。Not coming yet有還沒出門的意思，yet的位置錯了。) and he asked me "Lillian?" Lillian is my friend, she is also my different department colleague.

I just saw her a few minutes back,(或者可以寫 I saw her a few minutes ago. Before不能像我這樣用。) so I nodded and said "Yes. She is here." (用was here的話會變成她已經離開辦公室了。)

Then he went upstairs for about ten minutes,(時間點前面加for) and he went downstairs and was ready to leave. He waved his arm(只揮手掌的話好像有點鳥XD) when he went out and smiled back.

(或是showed me a smile. And是對等連接詞所以兩邊的動詞時態要一樣。還有，我逗點會亂下...)


At noon, I was eating lunch with my same department colleague. I didn't notice him,(perceive有『領悟』的感覺，又亂湊XDD) and my colleague told me "Hey, he said good-bye to you!"



I can remember this scene very clear and I don't know why but I really want to see him again.

I requested Lillian if there was a chance I would like to work with him "it's must be fun, please let me to do it.(要加受詞)" Lillian promised me. "Thanks a lot!" I said, "Love you Lillian!" Lillian laughed and patted me.

Life should fill some happy things, right? But, afterourd, I really regret I couldn't have study English hard, because....

→ to be continued....Ha!Ha!

( I can't finish it so soon, it's too difficult for me...)


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The other reason that I want to learn English is...

I meet a man about five months ago, he is a teacher from foreign, that time he was working for a department of manager on my office.

He came to our office, and went to looking for the manager, but it's Saturday, a holiday, the manager was not here, but I think maybe he have appointment with this manager.

I told him, used English in no good. I said "Manger is not here, not yet coming."
and he ask me "If Lillian?" Lillian is my friend, she also my different department colleague.

I saw her before a few minutes, so I nod and said "Yes. She was here."


Then he went upstairs, about ten minutes, and he went downstairs and ready leave here. He waved his hand when he went out, and show me a smile.

Noon, so I was eating lunch with my same department colleague, I didn't perceive him, and my colleague told me "Hey, he said good-bye to you!"



I can remember this screen very clear, I don't know why but I really want to see him again.

I request Lillian if there have chance I can work with him, it's must really fun, please let me to do. Lillian promise me. "Thanks a lot!" I said, "Love you Lillian!" Lillian laugh and pat me.

Life should fill some happy things, right? But, at after, I really regret if I can study English hard before....

→ to be continued....Ha!Ha!

( I can't finish it so soon, it's too difficult to me...)