First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English and Spanish now because I want to make friends from abroad. My native language is Chinese and I grew up in China. I enjoy singing, practicing guitar, and watching American tv drama.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm from Wuhan.  It's a great city in Central China.  I'm learning English and preparing to learn French.  I want to make friends from English-speaking and French-speaking countries.  (Of course, if you want to learn Chinese, I will be glad to help you.) I enjoy playing computer games and languages.  (Well, in fact, I'm only good at Engish, but i want to French for work.)
OK. If you want to make a freind who can help your Chinese, you can't miss me.
I wish everyone good luck! (Maybe the wish is too large...)

Make sure to leave spaces after punctuation is used.

MY TERRIBLE HOLIDAY

We have seven days for National Day.  I thought that we would have seveal days to climb mountains, but I have too mush homework.  Everyday, I am busy with my homework, so I have no time go out. (This is correct, but we would probably say "I don't have time to go out.)  I miss my old life!

You must leave space after punctuation.  Also, important nouns should be capitalized.  If you write or type a number under ten, you must spell it out in letters.  I am not sure what National Day is; that may or may no be correct.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

So...where to start? I am learning English because I like learning English and I think that talking with somebody could be the best way to improve my English skills. Other reasons that am I here are: I am a social person and I like tallking :-) (and making friends of course).
My native language is Czech because it is my mother tongue and I can give advice to everybody who would like to improve his or her Czech or just learn some simple phrases.
My hobbies are programing, music (all kind of music - classic too, I have played 12 years of violin :-)), I play table tennis horribly (local league - very amateur), but I enjoy it. This year, I am about to end school by maturita and then go to a university (IT) somewhere abroad, so I will need to speak well.

You use a lot of extra commas and need to remember to capitialize important things, but your grammar was very good.

Winnie the Pooh's Advice

"It is more fun to talk with someone who doesn't use long, difficult words but rather short, easy words like 'What about lunch?'" - Winnie the Pooh.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello.  My name is Mert.  I'm twenty years old.

You just need to remember to leave space after sentences.

Two Real Gentlemen!

I always do admire men who devote themselves for the welfare of their families!
Such as these two men!

No! No! I don't agree! They are not like Pat and Mat, they are real gentlemen!
If they fall down they are not killed. They are martyrs because they devote their life for the comfort of their families! :D

By the way despite all of my admiration, I cannot understand how they dare to do such horrible thing! Wow!