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    Eating at home or outside.

    More and more people eat outside instead of cooking at home while life is improving. Despite they are released from kitchens, they have more time to work or to enjoy their life. But their heathy becomes a serious issue. Live is threatened by food safe, environment and diseases. We'd rather eat at home than eat outside because it is safety, also, it can save more money.

     

    @everything is good, only "threatened", not "threathened" but this is very small mistake :)

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    September 26, 2012
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