My ideal job.

I want to be a travel designer in the future. A travel designer is someone who designs the ideal travel routes for customers, conducts business with other companies and discovers new tourist attractions for the agency. I enjoy traveling so I love the advantages gained by this type of work. The advantages of a travel designer are to travel around the world for free, at the agency's expense. Secondly, I would get a high salary and get a discount in many of the places that are affiliated with the agency. This type of work is freelance so it is more flexible and it provides great opportunities to meet and interact with various kinds of people. I want to earn a lot of money and travel all around the world. Furthermore, I want to give my parents the opportunity to travel to various places which is why this is my ideal job.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, nice to meet you.
I'm MinSun Park from Korea.
When I was in Korea, I was a public service announcer in a department store but now I'm an ESL student living in Toronto. I've been here for 2 weeks. I want to enjoy life in Toronto and improve my English language skills but I don't have any Canadian or Native English speaking friends yet.
I like to go shopping and I like travelling.
I usually wake up at 6:30 and go to ESL school. Sometimes, after class I go to the market, mall, library or just hang out with my classmates.
I'd like to make nice friends through this site.

My best friend.

My best friend is Hyeyoon who has the same name as me. That's the reason why we became friends when we first met at university. We were also surprised that we were born in the same hometown. After getting to know each other, we got close and took classes together, at least 2 every semester. Moreover, we applied to the same part-time job in a coffee shop and worked together for one year. With our allowance from the part-time job, we traveled to Europe for a month. It was an unforgettable trip and an enjoyable time spent together. Now we're not located close to each other but she is still one of my best friends. Since I left Korea for America, we have been keeping in touch with each other.

You got low scores during campus life. Do you have any reason why?

I'm practicing for interviews in English and the following are some of the questions likely to be asked.
I would like someone to correct it and give an opinion on it.
Thank you for your help.

Q1: You got low scores during campus life. Do you have any reasons why?

A1: The main reason was due to my low grades during my freshman year and I admit that I was unfocused at that time. After I was discharged from the army, I put all my efforts into achieveing my academic goals and as a result my grades continually got better.
Although my GPA is average, I got almost perfect grades in my major and ensured I was confidently knowledgable in this area. 

Q2:You have a high TOEIC score but your speaking level is low. What do you think the reason is?

A2:To be honest, I was completely focused on getting the high TOEIC scores but  at that time, it coincided with preparing for another certificate. However, now I have dedicated my time to concentrating on my English speaking skills in order to bring that up to the same high standards. Therefore, I'm confident that I will have the skills in English required for this position.

안녕하세요, I changed it so that it can sound better in the interview. (^-^ )