My cousin's wedding

Yesterday I was went to my cousin's wedding. He got married with to Veronica which who is two years younger than him. He decided to celebrate it in one an old church. He weared wore a black tailored suit instead while Veronica wore the typical white dress.
After hearing attending the ceremony, we drove to Sorrento.What can I say about Sorrento? Well, it is a wonderful city full of roses and flowers and next to the clear blue sea. 
When they arrived, we started eating, initially at a wide buffet ( at beginning a wide buffet ). Then we had moved until we were inside the restaurant. We eaten ate either meat or fish....I have to say both was were excellent.
One negative aspect: It is lasted a lot long time, about 8 hours.

We came back at home at 10.00 o'clock p.m but happy and at the same time, tired and destroyed.

Here are my nephew's two speeches for his competition. Please check it them and determine which one is better. Thanks.

Hello,everyone. My nephew will have an English speech competition. Here are my nephew's two speeches for his competition, please help me check and correct it them, then tell me which one is better. than the other one ? Thank you very much.
1、The first one
Today my topic is "Animals". Do you like animals? Nearly everybody likes animals. Some of people like dogs because they can help us. Someone likes rabbits because they're cute. Do you know what my favorite animal is? It is one of the most precious animals. They live in the ocean and are good at swimming. They are very cute and beautiful. They not only swim fast but are also smart. Most of their its color is gray, only a small number of it is are white. Though they look like fish, they are mammals. Because of their high IQ, dolphins  they (it is not a grammatical error to use "dolphins" but he asks "Can you guess its name now?" in the next few sentences so he shouldn't reveal the animal just yet) can be trained by people. They can learn things very quickly and do all the actions accurately. They are very friendly. Can you guess its name now? Yes, you are right. They are dolphins.
However, as we all known, the number of dolphins is getting smaller and smaller. Because of water pollution, there is less and less space for dolphins. Many people make money by hunting dolphins. If we don't protect them, maybe we'll lose our good friends some day. As a student, I hope more and more people should protect dolphins. I love dolphins very much, and I hope dolphins are our good friends forever. I hope they can live in the blue sea happily and peacefully. Let's protect the animals together. Let's take actions now.
2、The second one
Today my topic is" Birthdays" .Many people are celebrate birthdays all over the world because birthdays is are one of the most important days in their lives. On April 20th, is my birthday, I always have happy feelings on my birthday.B because many people, including my family and friends, had congratulated on wish me well! Every year, they all came to my small party I had for my birthday, brought me birthday presents, and said happy birthday to me. Sometimes the gifts surprised me very much. My mother always made birthday cake and cooked some delicious food for us on my birthday. Then, my friends helped me put the candles on the big cake. Every time I always made three birthday wishes. We ate together, sang together ,danced together and played funny games together. We were very happy to be together. Oh, I still remember that last birthday I got a funny name, "magic boy", because I showed a magic to them. They all felt very magical. Do you want to see this magic? Well, next time I will show it to you.

I personally like the "Animals" one better. 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello. My name's Gabriella. I'm learning English and French because I want to make friends.
My native language is Italian, and I live in Sardinia (Italy).
I like cooking.

Today I've knew made a new friend! I was looking for a native speaker when I saw this English guy on the chat of a famous language exchange site. Reading on his description, I thought that he was the perfect people person with which to learn with/from (depends on what you wanted to say)! I didn't know why, which characteristics or common interests suggested made me choose to chose  him. 

However I've told I spoke with him, and I think thought that he was very amusing!
He told me about his life, hobbies, and so on and I've done  I did the same (it should be better to say or rather I've I tried to do the same ahah).
So I've learnt I learned that we have a lot in common, of similarities and this made me happy because we can probably help each other improve our language skills it can help each other to improve.

This is a double exercise =) I'm trying to describe something that it's happened to me today and at the same time I'm trying to write using the past tense!
Waiting for your evalutation evaluation and corrections,
Goodnight to everyone, Fab

I am learning English, because I would like to use it during my trip. 

My native language is Italian, and I grew up in Italy.
I like music and movies. I listen to indie music (Radiohead, Blur) and electronic music (Aphex Twin, Massive Attack, Carbon Based Lifeforms).
I like to travel. Exactly 1 mounth month ago, I was in cambogia Cambodia.

I'm learning English beacuse because I will want to live in the US or in the UK. I'm from Italy and I'm 15. My favourite (favorite) hobbies are karate and football. I hope to meet many friendly people.

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I just wanted to bring to your attention that "favourite" is the British spelling. In American English, we spell it as "favorite". 

When you think about what the things you can't renounce from your life are, you might have strong great difficulties individualizing to individuate them... there They are in fact: family, friends, job work, and health.... Maybe it could It might be possible to form a classification, but surely it couldn't (wouldn't) be feasible to exclude one or another. Maybe often In life, you often have to choose which what your priorities are, but you should never forget to improve every sector  aspect (or facet) of your life.

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Hi Elena,

I had a few corrections and suggestions that I wanted to expand on.

1) Your first phrase is, I believe, technically correct. However, it might be improved upon if you wrote it as "When you think about the things that you can't renounce from your life". 

2) We usually say "great difficulty/difficulties" instead of "strong". 

3) I believe it would be better to use "wouldn't be feasible" instead of "couldn't". 

4) "Sector" typically refers to a division of a miltiary or the economy. 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a Chinese graduate student and have been learned learning English for 10 years, while but my English is still poor. For To further study abroad in speaking English English speaking countries, I find it is necessary to make some friends to improve my English. My favorite sports  sport is basketball, and I like cooking. I am happy to make be friends with you! That's all. learning