ElainaMc
English
Jun 17, 2013
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I want to improve my language particularly writing skills.
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English
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- I am a student who is training to become teacher, if there are any mistakes in my correction please correct them. Dear Sir/Madam (mention surname like Dear Mr.Smith OR Dear Ms. Elizabeth) Re (regarding): Full Time Legal Sectary Job Position (mention job position) I read about the above job opportunity on Emaths ( mention newspaper or website like Emaths Newspaper), and decided to apply for this position. I have attached my curriculum vitae (Just CV does not look professional) for your attention. (Mention about your education and qualities first they want to hire you for these qualities/education not your nationality). I have (undergraduate OR postgraduate) degree in Translation (mention full degree title i.e translation foreign languages) and have bilingual skills in German and Italian. I am confident, reliable and cooperative person who enjoy working as a member of team. (diplomatic is not right if there are 2 bosses then diplomatic person may have trouble). I like to improve myself from every day experience by learning from my seniors. If you are interested... (it is very strict like if you interested call me if not go to hell, you have be polite). I thank you of your time reading my resume (CV), and hope to hear from you soon. Kind regards, Ms Michael Smith (Your full name) Let me tell you something you look really diplomatic:)0 votedJune 2, 20130
- I am a student who is training to become teacher, if there are any mistakes in my correction please correct them. Dear Sir/Madam (mention surname like Dear Mr.Smith OR Dear Ms. Elizabeth) Re (regarding): Full Time Legal Sectary Job Position (mention job position) I read about the above job opportunity on Emaths ( mention newspaper or website like Emaths Newspaper), and decided to apply for this position. I have attached my curriculum vitae (Just CV does not look professional) for your attention. (Mention about your education and qualities first they want to hire you for these qualities/education not your nationality). I have (undergraduate OR postgraduate) degree in Translation (mention full degree title i.e translation foreign languages) and have bilingual skills in German and Italian. I am confident, reliable and cooperative person who enjoy working as a member of team. (diplomatic is not right if there are 2 bosses then diplomatic person may have trouble). I like to improve myself from every day experience by learning from my seniors. If you are interested... (it is very strict like if you interested call me if not go to hell, you have be polite). I thank you of your time reading my resume (CV), and hope to hear from you soon. Kind regards, Ms Michael Smith (Your full name) Let me tell you something you look really diplomatic:)0 votedJune 2, 20130
- Do I (woman) Need Patience? Do I (woman) Need Patience? Hey everyone, can you please correct my grammar i.e coma, article (the) etc… mistakes with red colour if possible. Many thanks I married to my boyfriend after the three years of relation. It was the fantastic moment of my life, when I first met him. He is an intelligent man, worked hard, have great sense of humour. It has been seven years to our marriage. We have a beautiful girl, name Madeleine. I got suspicious one evening, when my husband came late home. I asked him, why did he come late? He replied, that our relation can’t survive without the mutual trust, stayed quiet, went to him room. It has been few days, and he didn’t tell me, why did he come late at that night. He is a teacher, and always gives preference to professionalism. I have never seen him hanging around with any other woman, but I don’t know why I am feeling not comfortable, until he tells me about that evening. Should I keep quiet for few days, or should I still ask him until I get my answer? I don’t know what to do. Can someone help me?February 8, 201310
- You love them as you believe they look after you, they love you, they care you. Parents always love their children, no matter how bad, or good they are. It is hard to find good friends, friends only pass time with you to escape isolation. Without testing them you cannot say they love you. You had a great question, but it would been very interesting, if you would have asked why do we love Allah? Good luck, Zoy0 votedFebruary 7, 20130
- Am I Ignorant, or Arrogant Can someone please correct my grammar mistakes. Many thanks Am I Ignorant, or Arrogant The day, I was born, was a memorable day in my life. I spent the nine months in my mother’s womb, and finally come to this world. My mother used to be very ill during her pregnancy, she stayed three months in the hospital, and finally had an operation at my birth. The doctor, our family friend, told me, that my mother was nearly going to die at my birth. She suffered a lot during her pregnancy, and particularly at my birth. I have grown up, but could not help my mother. I have been to the prison five times since the age of 17 years. I do not listen to her, when she asked me not to do wrong things. I failed my exams, and escaped the death, when I was driving the stolen car. I don’t know, what has happened to me. Am I ignorant, or arrogant?February 4, 201310
Islam is a beautiful religion, with lot of choices, but within the boundaries. If you claim you love Allah (SWT, God), then you leave him because you want to marry someone else, then where is your love for Allah (SWT) gone. When we submit our will to him, we ask his foregiveness, mercy, and love. We also believe, that whatever he has for us, it will be better for our future. Then we say, we did not have an option as we have been left with only one choice. It is confusing, either our iman is not strong enough, or material things of this world have strong effecet on us. His love comes first, then everything else, even parents. May Allah (SWT) grant us wisdom, and strong iman.
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0 votedFebruary 4, 20130- Grammar Mistakes Hi, would you don’t mind to correct mu mistakes (grammar: come, indefinite article etc…), so I can learn better English. Looking after Parents I remembered the days, when my father dropped me off to the school, and picked me up. The temperature used to be 42 degree Celsius. He rod me on his bicycle, and put a small piece of a cold wet cloth on his head to escape from the sun, when he dropped me off to the school. He (my father) struggled all of his life to support my education. He was a factory worker, and earing £30 a month. As a result of his struggle, I completed my graduation from one of the UK’s best universities. He is now 64, weak and retired. He has never asked me to come back and, helped him. I am struggling to find a job, which can help me to lead a better future. I am feeling guilty, that I could not do what he has done for me. Whereas, he spent all of his life struggled for me. I don’t know what to do in this situation. Can someone help me, what should I do? How can I look after him, when I am looking for a job away from my home country? The economic situations are worst in my home country. Than you, ZoyFebruary 4, 201321
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