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Hi, I live in Iran and I'm a university student. I'm looking for a partner to improve my English. I usually have grammatical mistakes in my writing. I need someone help me to find my mistakes.
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    دانش آموزند

    In a Farsi course I came across the following sentence:

    بچه هايى كه دارند بازى مى كنند دانش آموزند
    This presumably means “The children who are playing are students”

    I would have phrased this sentence as follows:
    بچه هايى كه دارند بازى مى كنند دانش آموزان هستند

    What grammatical form is آموزند ? Is the first sentence, which I found in the Farsi course, correct?

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    September 14, 2012
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    September 14, 2012
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    The difference Hi, What's the difference between "clean" and "clean up" ?
    September 10, 2012
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    in addition of our friends' comments we can say "mind-enriching activity" in Farsi is "غنی سازی فعالیت ذهن" and "stimulating environments" is "محیط های محرک"
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    September 2, 2012
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  • Corrected

    present / past continuous


    من به شما مى خواهيد همه عيد الفطر مبارک !

    عید فطر بر همه شما مبارک باد.

    I have formulated two identical texts, which only differ in their tense (past / present). I wonder whether it is all correct (?)

    Past simple & past continuous:
    باب در كلاسش بود. دوستانش داشتند روى صندلى هايشان مى نشستند. تعدادى از آنها كتاب هاى بزرگى داشتند. باب داشت كتاب مى خواند. آليس داشت مى نوشت. مايكل داشت كيفش را باز مى كرد. هلن داشت صحبت مى كرد. نا گهان يكى در را باز كرد. بچه ها معلم را ديدند. آنها بلند شدند. معلم چندين كاغذ داشت. او كاغذها را به دانش آموزان داد. دانش آموزان غمگين بودند. آنها امتحان داشتند.
    Bob was in his classroom. His friends were sitting on their chairs. Some had big books. Bob was reading a book. Alice was writing. Michael was opening his bag. Helen was speaking. Suddenly, somebody opened the door. The children saw the teacher. They stood up. The teacher had several papers. He gave the papers to the students. The students were sad. The students had an exam.


    Present & present continuous
    باب در كلاسش است. دوستانش دارند روى صندلى هايشان مى نشنند می نشینند. تعدادى از آنها كتاب هاى بزرگى دارند. باب دارد كتاب مى خواند. آليس دارد مى نويسد. مايكل دارد كيفش را باز مى كند. هلن دارد صحبت مى كند. نا گهان يكى در را باز مى كند. بچه ها معلم را مى بينند. آنها بلند مى شوند. معلم چندين كاغذ دارد. او كاغذها را به دانش آموزان مى دهت می دهد. دانش آموزان غمگين هستند. آنها امتحان دارند.
    Bob is in his classroom. His friends are sitting on their chairs. Some have big books. Bob is reading a book. Alice is writing. Michael is opening his bag. Helen is speaking. Suddenly, somebody opens the door. The children see the teacher. They stand up. The teacher has several papers. He gives the papers to the students. The students are sad. The students have an exam.

     

    your translation was very well. (ترجمه شما خیلی خوب بود)

    My name is Golnaz. I'm learning English. I usually make grammatical mistakes in my writings. Please inform me if you find any mistakes in my sentences.

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    September 2, 2012
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hi, My name is Golnaz. My nickname is Nazita. Both of them are the name of flowers. I live in Iran. Therefore my native language is Farsi. I'm a university student. I'm studying medical engineering. I'm learning English because I would like to work abroad. I can improve the vocabulary and listening by myself, but I usually make some mistakes in my writings especially as grammatical aspects, which I couldn't find them alone. I need some help to improve my English.
    September 2, 2012
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