Could you please help check the article? Many thanks!!! The charts tell 5 main reasons and 6 problems given by the people about their journey in the US in the year of 2009. It is obviously that almost half or people travelled for work in the US in 2009. The biggest issue given by the tourists was the price of travel. According to the bar chart, 49% of the tourists travelled because of work, while the second highest number of people travelled for personal reasons, with a proportion of 30% less than work counterpart. The proportions of tourists travelled for shopping and social/recreation reasons are 16% and 10% respectively. Besides, a mere 6% of tourists travelled for visiting friends or relatives. Looking at the issue pie chart, the percentage of tourists complained about the price of travel is 36%, which is about as twice as that of people who complained about safety concerns or aggressive drivers. Apart from that, only 6% of tourists thought space for pedestrians as a major issue during their travels.

Are these two sentences correct? If not, how can I correct them? Thanks in advance! 1.The percentage of people who visited theme parks is the highest, at 38%. 2.The figure for people who visited Museums and Galleries is the second highest, at 37%, while the figure for people who visited Historic houses and Monuments is 21% less.

Which one is correct? It's really confusing… 1.The quantity of goods shipped by water and rail is about 40 million tones each. 2.The quantities of goods shipped by water and rail are about 40 million tones each. 3.The quantities of goods shipped by water and rail are about 40, 50 million tones respectively.

Retirement communities Recently, there is a rising trend that the elderly goes with retirement communities instead of their mature children’s homes. In regard to this trend, I believe that disadvantages outweigh advantages. First of all, the living standards of the elderly may not be well guaranteed. The food provided by the canteen in the retirement community may not satisfy their appetite, causing nutritional imbalance. Apart from that, the older people with diseases, for example: heart disease, may forget to take medicines without their children’s reminds. Secondly, since more and more older generation chooses to live in retirement communities, the places of these communities will not be enough, which will cause that these communities fail to benefit those people really in need, for example, childless older adults. What is more, the price of retirement communities will be higher and higher. As a result, the poor people who are more likely have demands for nursing home cannot afford to apply for an apartment.Last but not least, the governments will have to fund more in the services system for the elderly, which will definitely aggravate the burden of the youngsters. For instance, the government needs to build more communities, increasing the housing pressure. Also there will be requirements to raise the pension, since living alone will be more expensive than staying at home.In conclusion, a growing number of older generation choosing to live in the retirement communities will have negative effects on themselves, the society and governments.