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Could you help me to correct this English writing,Thank you!
Dear friends,
I am a senior student from the department of Chinese and literature in this university.I am writing this letter for the purpose of introducing a famous Chinese celebrity.
It,to begin with,seems my argument that Jack Ma is one of the most famous Chinese celebrities.He is so creative that he built up Internet Cyber platform.Secondly,he is not only smart in making money,but also proficient in English.English is so important,which could be accepted by every youngster on campus.Another element I must point out here is that he often cooperate with others.It is cooperate with others that enable he to be successful and well-known in the world.
Hope you can learn some trait from he.I would appreciate you also admit.Look forward to hearing from you.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
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Write an email to a group of internal students,and introduce one of famous Chinese celebrities.
Dear friends,
I am a senior student from the department of Chinese and literature in this university.I am writing this letter for the purpose of introducing a famous Chinese celebrity.
It,to begin with,seems my argument that Jack Ma is one of the most famous Chinese celebrities.He is so creative that he built up Internet Cyber platform.Secondly,he is not only smart in making money,but also proficient in English.English is so important,which could be accepted by every youngster on campus.Another element I must point out here is that he often cooperate with others.It is cooperate with others that enable he to be successful and well-known in the world.
Hope you can learn some traits from he.I would appreciate you also admit.Look forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Ming
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Could you help me to correct this English writting,Thank you!
Dear sir or Madam,
I am a customer who has lived in your hotel last week. I am writing the letter for the purpose of telling you what I have experienced and give you some advice to improve the service.
It ,to begin with, seems my argument that the room is not only without a television but also without a computer , I often wath TV at 7 o'lock every evening .I think the TV and computer are the basis appliances, more importantly the worse are the bad manner of steward and Stewardness who are reluctant to answer your questions about the hetel.I do want to share some advice for the hotel service with you. you should add more infrastractions te appeal more customers . The Stewardl and stewardness should accept trains every week to improve their service.
I would appreciate your taking my advice consderation. Hope you can take meassures to improve your hotel.I look forward to hearing from you soon.
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A letter of complaint
Dear sir or Madam,
I am a customer who has lived in your hotel last week. I am writing the letter for the purpose of telling you what I have experienced and give you some advice to improve the service.
It ,to begin with, seems my argument that the room is not only without a television but also without a computer , I often wath TV at 7 o'lock every evening .I think the TV and computer are the basis appliances, more importantly the worse are the bad manner of steward and Stewardness who are reluctant to answer your questions about the hetel.I do want to share some advice for the hotel service with you. you should add more infrastractions te appeal more customers . The Stewardl and stewardness should accept trains every week to improve their service.
I would appreciate your taking my advice consderation. Hope you can take meassures to improve your hotel.I look forward to hearing from you soon.
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A letter of complaint
Dear sir or Madam,
I am a customer who has lived in your hotel last week. I am writing the letter for the purpose of telling you what I have experienced and give you some advice to improve the service.
It ,to begin with, seems my argument that the room is not only without a television but also without a computer , I often wath TV at 7 o'lock every evening .I think the TV and computer are the basis appliances, more importantly the worse are the bad manner of steward and Stewardness who are reluctant to answer your questions about the hetel.I do want to share some advice for the hotel service with you. you should add more infrastractions te appeal more customers . The Stewardl and stewardness should accept trains every week to improve their service.
I would appreciate your taking my advice consderation. Hope you can take meassures to improve your hotel.I look forward to hearing from you soon.
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A letter of complaint
Dear sir or Madam,
I am a customer who has lived in your hotel last week. I am writing the letter for the purpose of telling you what I have experienced and give you some advice to improve the service.
It ,to begin with, seems my argument that the room is not only without a television but also without a computer , I often wath TV at 7 o'lock every evening .I think the TV and computer are the basis appliances, more importantly the worse are the bad manner of steward and Stewardness who are reluctant to answer your questions about the hetel.I do want to share some advice for the hotel service with you. you should add more infrastractions te appeal more customers . The Stewardl and stewardness should accept trains every week to improve their service.
I would appreciate your taking my advice consderation. Hope you can take meassures to improve your hotel.I look forward to hearing from you soon.
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